[FIC] Downfall

Jun 17, 2010 18:21

Title: Downfall
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou
Warnings: Death.

- For lyntek. ♥

When he was sixteen, Gunter fell in love. )

kyou kara maou, fic

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shayheyred June 17 2010, 16:06:45 UTC
If you're gonna write a death fic, this is the way to do it. Gunter's love is so complete and so powerful, that it's fitting it conclude this way, his love undimmed even as he lets go. I find this story, brief though it is, to be powerful and affecting, and I'm glad I read it.

One tiny correction: in this sentence but the purity of his soul far elapsed any of his physical attributes the word you want is "eclipsed," not "elapsed."

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mdseiran June 17 2010, 17:39:06 UTC
Thank you! Am glad it turned out well, death fics are always kind of tricky.

Haha you are completely right, fixed and thank you! ♥

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lyntek June 17 2010, 17:32:17 UTC
I loooooove QQ I'M GLAD YOU DECIDED TO POST IT FINALLY ♥ ♥ ♥ Thank you for writing it, still so very gorgeous!

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mdseiran June 17 2010, 17:39:52 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥ I'm sorry it took so long to post? 8D

I WAS LAZY

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sarkkhan June 17 2010, 19:30:48 UTC
Good Story, I like it very much^^

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