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mdseiran

[FIC] A Matter of Phrasing

May 17, 2007 02:12

Title: A Matter of Phrasing
Fandom: Gakuen Heaven
Warnings: Slash, PG-13.

- For 15pairings, #5 it's not real.

( It wasn't as if Niwa and Hide were inseparable. One could be seen without the other, sometimes. But more often than not they would be walking around campus together; the King and his Vizier. )

gakuen heaven, fic, 15pairings

Comments 12

lyntek May 16 2007, 23:29:36 UTC

I love your fics so much ;O; This is so clever and was so much fun to read! I especially loved those snippets of convo between Niwa and Kaoru (poor Kaoru-chan XD from Queen to Therapist!), and the ending is so fitting ♥ ♥ ♥ Why making me love pairings I don't normally like? ;O; (gnaws on you!)

mdseiran May 16 2007, 23:37:12 UTC

b/c you sekritly like them, you just won't admit it. XDDD ♥

(write more fic >:E)

sayora347 May 17 2007, 02:22:12 UTC

Eee! That was so cute! I love it! And the fact that Saionji was asked for advice by Niwa *giggle* Amsuing!

mdseiran May 17 2007, 19:13:38 UTC

Thank you, am glad you enjoyed it! ^^

animegoil May 17 2007, 02:52:20 UTC

Wellll~! Ooh, delicious. I loved Niwa's ramblings to Kaoru, thoroughly amusing, the whole thing. It was a nice- realistic- take on their friendship/courtship. ^_^

mdseiran May 17 2007, 19:14:04 UTC

xDD Glad it came out that way, thank you for the nice comment!

katherine_15 May 17 2007, 16:13:20 UTC

LOVELY. *squees & bounces* V v sweet, and the King is adorable. Hee, the way Nakajima toys with him! Deliciously wicked. *adores madly*

mdseiran May 17 2007, 19:15:04 UTC

Nakajima is so fun when he's at his most evil. XD

Thank you for the comment!

evocates May 18 2007, 03:52:37 UTC

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You keep writing about my absolutely favourite pairings and I'm at work now so I can't squeal at all but oh, oh I want to. This is wonderful. I love Niwa and the scattered conversations with Kaoru that are so hilarious especially with Kaoru's implied reactions and god, the thing with Niwa knowing the 'Nakajima gave me a great night' smile and only being mad about Hide not telling him is wonderful. I'm barely restraining myself from flailing and flapping my hands like an idiot here because OMGHIDE. Devious!Hide! Confusing Niwa and looking at him like he's an extra spicy plate of curry and the movie date and just... just everything.

-SQUEES AS QUIETLY AS SHE CAN-

Can I request Niwa/Kaoru next? Or Niwa/Omi? Or better yet, Hide/Kaoru? =DDDDD Or best of all, the Royal Foursome? Or all of them?! =DDDDDDD!!!

Psst, no pressure at all here.

mdseiran May 18 2007, 11:52:13 UTC

Fellow Royal Pairings fan~ ♥

Am glad you liked it. XD Niwa/Kaoru and Hide/Kaoru do have their own prompts, but I can't promise they'll be next.