Jul 03, 2004 03:45
So im home for the weekend from FSU. its not that bad. i had to write a narrative poem in english class...so this is what i wrote:
Love
Sometimes I feel like I can’t go on without you. Remembering your compassion makes me feel proud when I talk about you. I don’t want to leave, but you know I must. The dove will deliver my love letter to you. Your gorgeous, glistening, green eyes make me melt. The rain from your eyes is making my drive difficult. A frown. Gray fills my mind. I don’t know when I’m coming home, but I hope that you still belong to me when I arrive on a beautiful, sunny Saturday afternoon. The scent of flowers in your hair will be even greater than how I remember it. School is like my jail. I am deeply saddened that I cannot escape until forever it seems. In my head I can picture you looking through your square window. You are thinking that our love is like our town: always growing. My dear, my love, I’m coming back for you.
sorry if it sounds weird but i had strict guidelines
but my rachel loves it and thats all that matters :)