Mommy Issues

[md123]

Title: Mommy Issues
Author: md123
Rating: G
Word Count: 424
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Spoilers: "Florida"
Summary: Jack reflects on Liz's insults. A kind of depressing take on an episode that made everyone really happy.

Comments

[demilybones]

This drabble explored my thoughts about this episode wonderfully. I have an idea of who Jack will end up to thanks to news about the finale, but for now it's surely depressing to watch him achieve his (material) dreams without finding a romantic partner to share it with. That being said, where the heck has Liddy been?

But I digress. You nicely showcase Jack's character development here. It's easy to remember that there was a time where he would refuse to see the other side of things, much less a painful truth coming from Liz Lemon. Well done.

[md123]

Thanks. Just when I think I have nothing left to say about these two, we get a lovely episode like this one that gets the wheels turning again.

[frey_at_last]

Yay! This is what I was thinking after that (delightful and satisfying) episode, and I only wish there was more to come! It's sad to think of Jack in this position, even though in many ways he's totally earned it. :(

[md123]

I'm glad this scratched your itch. This episode had so much material that there may be another story or two in it, depending on what happens in the next two weeks.

[singsongrandom]

I'm always astounded by your writing talent - very impressive! To be honest, I also felt that Liz's comment to Jack in "Florida" was harsh, so this fic was just what I needed to satisfy my mindgrapes on the subject. I look forward to your future fanfictions!

[md123]

It seems like everyone was thinking the same thing!