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Fic: Everlong, a futurefic

Apr 23, 2009 10:11

TITLE: Everlong
Written for: McSmooch
Rating: pg-13
Spoilers: 1,995 words; A Post Atlantis futurefic

( He pretty much blows the whole thing before six o'clock. )

author:tex

Comments 48

ladycat777 April 23 2009, 15:28:51 UTC

On the one hand, no one does that adult, strained hurt of two people who live and love and fight together quite as well as you.

On the other, oh boys, you are a collection of stupid fucks that should never, ever get laid the way you screw things up. Good thing we always put them together, huh? :)

crysothemis April 23 2009, 15:36:09 UTC

Ahahah!

"I was going to ask you to marry me, dickhead?"

Now if that's not romance, what is???

I laughed. I cried. I got all mushy inside.

*loves*

beachlass April 23 2009, 15:40:44 UTC

I'm grinning and grinning and grinning.

taiteilija April 23 2009, 15:49:06 UTC

That is about the best proposal I've ever read *g*

bluespirit_star April 23 2009, 15:55:46 UTC

That is just so perfect - exactly the way it would go with these two too!
Wonderful - thank you. :-)