Coup de Foudre by Zinnith

Jan 24, 2009 20:48

Aaaand this one is for argosy who wanted to read something about storms and/or being struck by lightning, so I had to do some potentially harmful things to the boys. No worries, no-one gets badly hurt and there is a kiss at the end ;)

1024 words and unbeta'd because I'm still so very late. You know I'm not a native English speaker, right?

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loriel_eris January 24 2009, 20:08:48 UTC
Oh god, of course they were going to get hit by lightning; that's just the kind of luck the boys have! *g*

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zinfic January 25 2009, 07:00:05 UTC
Without bad luck they would have no luck at all...

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sgamadison January 24 2009, 22:19:20 UTC
Ooooh, I really liked this--loved the images you've invoked here and the simplicity of the 'we're alive' moment. Very, very nice.

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zinfic January 25 2009, 07:00:38 UTC
Thank you! What better reason for a life affirming kiss? *g*

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anonymous January 25 2009, 02:11:05 UTC
You know I'm not a native English speaker, right?

Ahah! I think we have just found out you are not a native French speaker either (mini typo: it's "foudre" with only one "r").

:)

I love teasing helpless fanfic writers by nitpicking them to death!

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anonymous January 25 2009, 02:15:31 UTC
Sorry, I just can't help myself!

It's "Celsius"...

*off to get some serious treatment for spelling compulsiveness*

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zinfic January 25 2009, 06:58:15 UTC
Nope, just three years of high school French half an eternity ago, but thank you for spotting the typos ;)

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bluespirit_star January 25 2009, 08:29:42 UTC
Oh, that's lovely! (Well, them finally getting together - not the actually being struck by lightning bit. *g*)

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zinfic January 25 2009, 08:59:55 UTC
It was all for a good cause! *g*

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bluespirit_star January 25 2009, 17:26:06 UTC
Oh, of course! You set it up beautifully - & it let our boys finally kiss! Yay!)

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adafrog January 25 2009, 23:59:20 UTC
lol Thanks.

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zinfic January 26 2009, 05:22:23 UTC
Thank you for reading!

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