Written for the #26 Challenge - Last
Title: The Last Word (or when you see with my eyes)
Author:
neevebrodyCharacters: John, Rodney, Jennifer
Rating: G
Words: ~3,500
Spoilers: Possible spoilers for Last Man
Beta:
velocitygrass beta'd this even though she doesn't usually read this type of fic. Your thoughts and approval really meant a lot to me, hon, thank you so
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There's a story that's cut a swathe through my heart ever since I read it, a story that was very, very good but still hurt. It's the 'Hundred Words For Snow' story. In an odd way, you've made it all better. Not to give too much away for that story, there are decisions made and not made in both, and ironically, it's the frightening reality of that chip that soothes away the unrequited love-pain that happens in stories like this.
I love that Rodney's imperfect, here. That he is selfish enough to name his son John--not even necessarily that it's a conscious selfishness, either, and I think that Jennifer knows that, too. In my fanon for this story, Rodney tells himself that it's okay to shy away from the tough decisions, it's okay to deny himself, because he knows there are alternate universes out there, and for the number of times he's snagged himself on indecision (go to John and tell him, or stay where I am and appreciate what I have?) over the years, in each instance there's a reality where he's given in. He's told himself he has to content himself with that knowledge.
I almost want to write a Rodney PoV view to that effect, heh.
Anyway, I really, really love this, thank you so much for writing it, truly.
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This is a wonderful premise and would make a lovely long and complex fic. I'm kind of awe-struck at your kind words and I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I honestly think if more people gave it a look and didn't immediately shy away from "death!fic" they'd see how much love is shown. Yes, it does hurt, and nobody escapes unscathed, with is real. And I know this is supposed to be "escape" stuff, but I honestly could not sit through the Shrine and study over it without thinking how much John and Rodney love and need each other, but at the same time how easily it would be for John to remain stoic (in light of what he learned in Last Man), for Rodney to make a wrong decision based on infatuation, and for Jennifer to be selfish enough to ignore what she surely sees as well to "let" Rodney make a wrong decision. I hope more people will give it a chance, but...
I'm really glad you did and I thank you!
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I almost want to write a Rodney PoV view to that effect, heh.
I keep thinking about this concept. I'm not sure how you feel about co-writing, or if you'd even be interested, but I think the idea of exploring the different universes is fascinating, i.e. showing a succession of alternate realities. If you're interested, maybe we could discuss it sometime. I will say, though, that I have obligations through the end of the year (and maybe beyond if I don't finish the Airport AU in November) so this would be a project for next year for me. Now, if you'd rather not... I understand perfectly, but I would still be interested to see your Rodney POV.
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*grin so broad it has its own zip code*
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