Challenge #44 fic: Lightning. PG.

[velocitygrass]

Title: Lightning
Author: velocitygrass
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Season 5 casting
Word count: 893
Summary: But instead of a well-deserved "What the hell?!" Rodney's brain takes a shortcut to "Yes, this."
Note: Not sure where this particularly writing style came from. I had to force myself not to include sentences with "you" and "I

Comments

[mary_russell11]

awwww...this is adorable and funny and sweet and hilarious even!! I like it and I love the Rodney who knows that things will work out*beams*

[velocitygrass]

Aww, thank you! I just had this idea where Rodney would be struck with this realization and it would be like love at first sight is in the movies or as it's told by some who experienced it.

[trobadora]

Awww, that is incredibly sweet. ♥

[velocitygrass]

Thank you :)

[hestia_lacey]

Oh, this is just adorable. The image of John trying to lean back enough to grab his ankle made me grin so wide! Rodney's voice was spot on here, too.

[velocitygrass]

Hehe. Yes, I wanted John just being his normal dorky self, so that it's really nothing special just the moment where Rodney is struck by what their relationship is really meant to be. I'm happy it made you grin (it makes me grin too :)

Thank you!

[mirabile_dictu]

Oh, now that is deeply romantic! Just what I like about those men. Thank you!

[velocitygrass]

Oh, thank you! I'm a romantic when it comes to them :)

[tarlanx]

LOL! So very sweet!

[velocitygrass]

Thank you!