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Challenge Ficlet: The Ceremony

Oct 20, 2007 17:55

Written for #4 Challenge - Weddings
Title: The Ceremony - 2,220 words
Rating: G
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Legal: Not Mine
Summary: Rodney was pleased, at least, to see that no one was dressed in ancient druidical attire, wore flowers in their hair or was naked…
Beta: Un-beta'd so all errors are my own
My second effort for this challenge and I just ( Read more... )

genre: established relationship, pairing: john/rodney, challenge: 04 - weddings, rating: g, genre: humor, author: neevebrody

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fredbassett October 20 2007, 22:35:55 UTC

Aw, this was lovely :)

neevebrody October 21 2007, 00:10:40 UTC

Thank you. I had so much fun writing this.

courtberger October 20 2007, 22:37:31 UTC

It made me cry.

This is beautiful! I'm going to hunt down some chocolate now.

Court

neevebrody October 21 2007, 00:19:15 UTC

It made me cry

Oh gosh, thank you. *blushes* That is a high compliment indeed and I really appreciate it. Also, I'm so glad you enjoyed this, I had so fun much writing it and admit to getting a little teary myself.

I hope you found some good chocolate!

tarlanx October 20 2007, 22:45:57 UTC

So sweet :-)

neevebrody October 21 2007, 00:22:30 UTC

Oh, thank you for reading, and I'm glad you liked it.

azilver October 20 2007, 22:54:40 UTC

ok, the 'bait' thing? John so set madison up to that! i can see it now, sitting on the floor coaching her on the 'vows'...
so cute, loved madison, she's a real mckay that one.
aza

neevebrody October 21 2007, 00:31:12 UTC

Hee! Yeah, Rodney really needs to pay more attention to what his "boyfriend" is doing when he's not paying attention!

Madison is definitely a McKay! I loved writing her, Jeannie and Rodney, and hope to be able to write more of their interactions in the future.

Thank you for reading and for your lovely comments. I'm so happy you enjoyed this. (love your icon)

velocitygrass October 21 2007, 01:54:34 UTC

Awwwww. Short stuff (loved that nickname) marrying them to John's vows. Sweet and funny. Rodney and Jeannie's identical reactions. *sniff*

And loved Rodney's "I most certainly do"

neevebrody October 21 2007, 03:00:24 UTC

Writing this story was so much fun. It's hard to write humor and that you thought it was funny is a real compliment. Thank you.

And yes, John did a little coaching on the vows, actually I think he put the whole idea in Maddie's head. And John playing dolls - I couldn't resist it.

Thanks again for reading and your lovely comments. So glad you enjoyed it.