Comments | mcsheplets: Fic: Communing with Atlantis (McShep, R) It's only just begun fest

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Fic: Communing with Atlantis (McShep, R) It's only just begun fest

Jan 12, 2009 10:55

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pairing: john/rodney, it's only just begun, genre: au, rating: r, author: indusnm

Comments 15

ccmom January 12 2009, 18:24:48 UTC

Nicely done.

indusnm January 12 2009, 19:00:16 UTC

Thanks! It's a little stranger than I normally do, and some was lost in a small computer problem, but it's something different. I plan to write some small stories in this verse eventually

antares04a January 13 2009, 17:18:51 UTC

This is an interesting universe you have created. And I think it's a great ending that the four of them are together in Atlantis now as a team.
And I like that Jack and Daniel are together, too!

indusnm January 15 2009, 00:16:35 UTC

I wanted to keep the team dynamic, but have Jack there too. I want to eventually bring Torren into it too. There's going to be a fairly long sequel dealing with some season 4 stuff... But that may come after this semester, which already promises to be a bruiser!

indusnm January 15 2009, 00:16:57 UTC

ANd thanks for the review, by the way!

Communing with Atlantis aqualegia January 14 2009, 00:57:23 UTC

Very nice; and a happy ending for John and Rodney, with a side-order of Jack and Daniel. :)

Re: Communing with Atlantis indusnm January 15 2009, 00:12:40 UTC

Thanks! I like the four of them ;)

goddess47 January 14 2009, 21:52:38 UTC

What a wonderful and unique universe.... and a fascinating introduction..... I'd love to see more......

indusnm January 15 2009, 00:12:06 UTC

Thanks. It's gotten a fairly lukewarm reception, so I was considering trashing the whole thing, but you're so nice I just might go ahead with the next little bit I was planning ;)

goddess47 January 15 2009, 16:38:26 UTC

Ah, but if you don't write for yourself then it becomes work rather than a labor of love. This is *your* universe... expand it or not as you please. Not every work gets reviewed (and I often wish I could get more information about lurkers) so you can't let the number of reviews affect what you think you really want to do.

indusnm January 15 2009, 23:51:16 UTC

True! I've got a crazy semester, but I have a few ideas for a sequel and a short prequel.

Thanks for the advice!

missimae2u January 22 2009, 05:17:02 UTC

i really liked this.....it was a great twist on stargate and a universe i would gladly read more of......the addition of jack and daniel of course just sweetens the pot for me.....

indusnm January 22 2009, 05:42:32 UTC

thanks! I have some ideas ;)