TEAM WORK: acid test, "First Impressions"

Aug 09, 2010 19:12

Title: First Impressions
Author: verocious
Team: Work
Prompt: acid test
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: Talking. About feelings. In public. John longs for a rock-throwing planet.
Beta thanks: icouldskateaway is the best cheerleader and problem-solver in the universe. Thank you so much for making this fic happen. <3

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taste_is_sweet August 9 2010, 17:27:41 UTC
That was just awesome. You got the theme and the prompt beautifully, and made something funny and wonderfully bittersweet out of it (except for John being unconscious for more than a day. Ow!). You rock like a rocking thing.

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v_greyson October 20 2010, 00:39:04 UTC
except for John being unconscious for more than a day. Ow!

ha, yes, i think my inexperience with head injuries is showing! oops.

but i am glad you liked it anyway :) thank you for the comment!

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admiralandrea August 9 2010, 17:31:14 UTC
Hee, this was a lot of fun! I liked them attacking John because of his hair *g*

And Teyla owing Ronon twenty snickers is just awesome!

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v_greyson October 20 2010, 00:42:27 UTC
thank you! i'm so glad you liked it! :D

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oceania August 9 2010, 17:43:49 UTC
I absolutely loved this. I'm "totally in love" with it. Nicely done.

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v_greyson October 20 2010, 00:42:54 UTC
thanks! :)

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danceswithgary August 9 2010, 17:44:01 UTC
That was cute and sweet! :-D

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v_greyson October 20 2010, 00:43:12 UTC
thank you! :D

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juniperphoenix August 9 2010, 17:44:53 UTC
This was fun! I love the Fear Factor discussion and "Please don't make me talk about my feelings." :D

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v_greyson October 20 2010, 00:43:34 UTC
thanks! the fear factor thing is probably my favorite part *g*.

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