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TEAM WAR: Coup de Grâce, "The Dread and Fear of Kings"

Sep 14, 2009 19:11

Title: The Dread and Fear of Kings
Author: valderys
Team: War
Prompt: Coup de Grâce
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angsty, some violence.
Summary: They were used to odd happenings and sudden danger, even on Atlantis itself. A woman's voice calling John to come away? That wasn't even a blip on the scanner - until John began to listen ( Read more... )

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danceswithgary September 14 2009, 19:59:18 UTC

That was completely chilling. *shudders*

incidental_fire September 14 2009, 21:57:27 UTC

::whistles:: Nicely done, the coldness of "Chaya's" thoughts was just perfect for the Replicators, and I liked the multiple layers of the story.

dossier September 15 2009, 00:40:43 UTC

That's really twisted--I love that I had no idea what was going to happen next. though, I *eeped* at the ending, OMG. that's almost worse than an out-right death, hhhm? the utter loss of self? great story!

chkc September 15 2009, 00:58:44 UTC

This story is both well written and frightening. I kept being surprised (or horrified D:) by what was happening and couldn't predict what will come, at all. It's interesting how at the end replicator!Chaya didn't only learn mercy, but satisfaction as well.

*sends hugs to John and Rodney*

lavvyan September 15 2009, 16:24:25 UTC

Oh, ouch. Wow, this really packs a punch. Gorgeous.