TEAM PEACE: Around the Clock, "Pulled Out From Inside"

[fluffyllama]

Title: Pulled Out From Inside
Author: altyronsmaker ( interview)
Team: Peace
Prompt: Around the Clock
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Manipulative sex
Summary: While exploring an uninhabited planet for future recreational use, John's team gets kidnapped, and he must fight his way to the outpost beyond the Ancient City to take back the team

Comments

[panisdead]

I like your take on this premise. Cool!

[elementalv]

You took an interesting route on this, but I have to admit that the image I liked the most was a cranky Teyla taking it out on the soldiers. Unexpected downtime can be a complete and utter bitca.

[danceswithgary]

Poor John, always fighting against himself. Nice job with the prompt! :-D

[argosy]

That was very entertaining!

[reddwarfer]

This was really interesting. And there was that bit that reminded me of Labyrinth. The up or down bit. And Rodney making John tell him what he wanted, that was great. Torture for John, but still awesome.