TEAM ROMANCE: Absent without leave, "Clear Blue Skies"

[fluffyllama]

Title: Clear Blue Skies
Author: lamardeuse ( interview)
Team: Romance
Prompt: Absent without leave
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Summary: John spread his arms wide, encompassing the beach and the waves beyond. "Can't you see the potential? Club Med Pegasus

Comments

[sheafrotherdon]

Oh, this is just adorable! I love how deftly it's written - the little touches of humor and the bashful mating dance of the Sheppard/McKay :D I love that their first time is all about elbows and collisions in the dark, and that they have no idea how to *ask* each other to cuddle. And I love that they named the constellations the DeLorean, the Dead Parrot and Batman's Belt :D I'm grinning so big!!!! Wonderful job :D

[lamardeuse]

Heee! Thank you so much, hon! I'm glad you thought it worked. :)

[wildestranger]

Most enjoyable and delightful. You've conveyed John's relief at having a vacation really well. ;)

[lamardeuse]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[tianostra]

Loved this, thank you! So much delightful scenery and atmosphere just sketched in with a few (but the right) touches. And their voices were spot on. You move so *swiftly* and cover so much ground in so few words -- v. impressive. Now I want lobster!

[lamardeuse]

Thank you! Hope you were able to satisfy your lobster craving. :)

[ladycat777]

John's hand slid down Rodney's body to find a very interested elbow. “Good thing we don't have to worry about ratings.”

Okay, whoever you are, not only am I sighing, happy, and grinning like a loon -- I now have to offer you my soul for that line. It's, um, slightly tarnished?

[lamardeuse]

*waves* I'll take that soul now. :) Thanks, hon!

[lamardeuse]

Glad you liked that line! Thanks. :)