TEAM AWAY: Ace in the hole , "Baseball Boogaloo"

Jun 30, 2008 18:29

Title: Baseball Boogaloo
Author: skinscript
Team: Away
Prompt: Ace in the hole
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Summary: When John Sheppard leaves the Flyboys to pitch for the Atlanteans in the new International League of Baseball, he’s leaving behind a reputation he’d rather forget and carrying with him the aftermath of an injury that ( Read more... )

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reginagiraffe June 30 2008, 17:34:31 UTC
The story link doesn't work.

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reginagiraffe June 30 2008, 17:34:55 UTC
You're quick! *g*

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fluffyllama June 30 2008, 17:35:07 UTC
I have to get the link back to the poll and add it to the end of the story, so it can take a minute to go up :)

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reginagiraffe June 30 2008, 17:46:19 UTC
Don't mind me, I'm just impatient. *g* (And I'll keep that in mind for the future.)

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skinscript July 17 2008, 23:36:41 UTC
Thank you! Just *having* this idea surprised me, but it burst into my head pretty much fully formed. Lucky! I'm very glad you liked it!

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incidental_fire June 30 2008, 18:47:33 UTC
I am a *huge* baseball fan, and I loved every bit of this story, from beginning to end. Everyone's voices were pitch-perfect, but they fit into their roles here perfectly. The names of the league and the teams were great, and I like how you mirrored the various rivalries. John's thoughts about the Wraith were funny - maybe they only practiced at night? It's funny, I hadn't ever thought about it, but Rodney really does have the perfect body type for a catcher and power hitter. Okay, this is a little bit disjointed, but know that I really adored this story.

(So would this story be classified as "baseball accidents made them do it"? Since there weren't any aliens around, but I don't know if John would have made his move without needing kinky baseball sex to help Rodney get over his fear. Maybe this should be a new category...)

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skinscript July 17 2008, 23:39:58 UTC
I think SAMTDI "Sports Accidents Made Them Do It" is a great category! Write me some? :)

Rodney is *totally* built to hit.

Thank you so much! I was a baseball fan a long, long time ago, but gave it up to feed my hockey habit. I didn't even realise I still liked the game til I wrote this - now I actually find myself *watching* it again!

Thank you!

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simboo June 30 2008, 18:53:28 UTC
I've never watched a baseball game in my life and don't know a thing about it but this was so exciting. Awesome!

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skinscript July 17 2008, 23:41:13 UTC
Thank you! I was hoping that it would work for folks who didn't know the game, like 'Fireball' works for people who don't know NASCAR. I don't think I made that kind of quality, but I'm really glad you liked it!

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sheafrotherdon June 30 2008, 18:57:25 UTC
oh my GOD. I don't think i can put into words how much I loved this - how this is my kryptonite; how about 1/3 in I had to stop for a minute and catch my breath; how I IM'd everyone I could and said "IT'S LIKE PORN. ONLY NOT THE NAKED KIND. THE KIND WITH BASEBALL."

asdjfhkajshdf I am so done. Stick a fork in me. *falls over*

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skinscript July 17 2008, 23:42:37 UTC
I was *so* tempted to put in the actual baseball porn, but then I figured that anything I came up with could not possibly match the fabulous imaginations of the SGA reader community. *laughs* So glad you liked it!

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