TEAM FINE: on the edge, "End of the Game"

[trobadora]

Title: End of the Game
Author: ozsaur
Team: Fine
Prompt: on the edge
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Word count: 1833
Summary: John is good at self-control.
Author's Notes: Thanks to both dustandroses and trillingstar for cheerleading and encouragement. You guys are the best!

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Comments

[hanorganaas]

Very hot!!! Nice imagery great job!

[ozsaur]

Thank you! I'm happy you liked the imagery!

[melodysparks]

Wow that was... Hot is an understatement

[ozsaur]

Thank you! I'm no judge of my own fic, so I'm happy that it turned out to be hot! *g*

[danceswithgary]

That was incredible, the intensity in the description almost vibrated off the screen!

[ozsaur]

Thank you! I'm happy it turned out to be intense.

[syble4]

Wow, this story practicality vibrated off the screen. Very hot!

[ozsaur]

Thank you! I can't judge my own stories, so I'm glad it's hot!

[popkin16]

This is crazy hot. I am just...wow. Unf.

[ozsaur]

Thank you! Happy that you enjoyed it!