Comments | mcshep_match: TEAM PLAY: crash and burn, "because falling's not the problem"

fluffyllama in mcshep_match

TEAM PLAY: crash and burn, "because falling's not the problem"

Aug 20, 2010 21:02

Title: because falling's not the problem
Author: monanotlisa
Team: Play
Prompt: crash and burn
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Off-screen sexbot sex.
Summary: This isn’t the story. This is what happens afterwards.

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Comments 43

taste_is_sweet August 20 2010, 20:08:38 UTC

HA HA HA HA HA. What a sweetly, hilariously silly story. I really did lol with this one. Thanks. :D

mezzo_cammin August 20 2010, 20:14:58 UTC

okay, this? Possibly he was receiving emotional input from an alternate universe (possibly the one where he talked about his feelings). really, truly, made me laugh out loud. Oh, John.

And they covered the sexbot with a blanket in between rounds! Hee!!!

Loved this! :o)

kensieg August 20 2010, 20:18:26 UTC

loved the fact that sex wasn't the point of the story. I mean it wasn't once we have sex everything will be perfect. Also John talking about his feelings in character.

argosy August 20 2010, 20:26:37 UTC

Ahahaha! Rodney used his sexbot to build a processor! This was adorable. :D

neevebrody August 20 2010, 20:27:31 UTC

I loved the voices here! And them covering the bot with a blanket... *grins*

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neevebrody September 15 2010, 14:38:59 UTC

I should have known this was yours by how spot on the boys were. You do that so well.

Congrats to you as well - it was a wonderful competition with lovely offerings on both sides. Now I just have to catch up with the ones I saved/missed.