We All Get Together When We Bury Our Friends
Title: We All Get Together When We Bury Our Friends
Author: crossbow1
Pairing: None explicit
Rating: PG13-ish
Summary: They all get together when they bury their friends.
Dedication/Beta: mudrer_scene
Disclaimer: Hasn't happened yet.
Hey guys. This is one I posted back in July, but it's my favorite writing technique and I'll probably be using it a lot more and I wanted to get feedback on something specific: My objective is to use the characters names just enough that you can always tell who's speaking without it sounding unnatural, as people rarely use each other's names in normal conversation. Obviously *I* thought I accomplished it or I wouldn't have posted it, but I did get a few comments saying I overused the names and a few others saying it was too hard to tell who was talking. I know you can't please everyone, but I think it's slightly important in a story to be able to tell who's speaking so I need to be sure, ya know?
We All Get Together When We Bury Our Friends
Author: crossbow1
Pairing: None explicit
Rating: PG13-ish
Summary: They all get together when they bury their friends.
Dedication/Beta: mudrer_scene
Disclaimer: Hasn't happened yet.
Hey guys. This is one I posted back in July, but it's my favorite writing technique and I'll probably be using it a lot more and I wanted to get feedback on something specific: My objective is to use the characters names just enough that you can always tell who's speaking without it sounding unnatural, as people rarely use each other's names in normal conversation. Obviously *I* thought I accomplished it or I wouldn't have posted it, but I did get a few comments saying I overused the names and a few others saying it was too hard to tell who was talking. I know you can't please everyone, but I think it's slightly important in a story to be able to tell who's speaking so I need to be sure, ya know?
We All Get Together When We Bury Our Friends