FIC; Whispers of the Heart; Richard/Kahlan

[mcc2040]

Title: Whispers of the Heart
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 3,208
Pairing: Richard/Kahlan
Summary: Richard leaves to fight a war, Kahlan remains behind to maintain Aydindril.

Authors Notes: Another shameful piece of fic I hate to call my own. Written for legendlandMy prompt was "Whisper" and my theme is Richard/Kahlan. I chose to do a 2,500 word fic and a fanmix of 8

Comments

[lotslovercss]

OH MY WORD!!

You so dedded me with this!! I have no idea how you even think for a second that this was not your best. *fainting*

This was so intense and so passionate and so absolutely *GAH!*

I am having a very hard time deciding which to quote b/c I loved all of it but here it goes...

It had been days since she’d gotten a response from him. Whenever he found the time, he would write to her. When she wasn’t busy dealing with the council or taking Confessions, or seeing to whatever else needed her undivided attention, Kahlan spent her time in their room, laying in nothing but his old woods-worn tunic. It was the only thing that kept her from falling apart, and she lived for the days when Richard would be available to reply to her.

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it when Kahlan wear's Richard's blue shirt. Me wants one so bad...especially with him in it!

‘Kahlan…’

‘Richard Cypher, you better not die, you hear me? I will tear the veil and march into the Underworld myself, and you will regret the day you ever thought to die on me. You hear me? And don’t think I won’t!’

‘Well, I can’t have you doing that, now can I?’

She always said she could hear the whispering of his heart, calling to hers in times of separation or desperation.

Richard had never heard such a thing.

He never thought ones heart could truly carry a message to another…until now.

*SWOONS* Read this part like 10 times b/c it was so awesome. Love the whole idea of the whispers of the heart. Very romantic. Also, very awesome artwork to go with it.

Loved it, bb! :D

BTW: So sorry for spamming you but it's your own fault for being so awesome! :)

[mcc2040]

The only reason I don't care for it is because I would've rather have added SO MUCH MORE DETAIL x'D Especially for the sexin. But alas, I was not feeling it. This fic would've worked better in chapters x'D.

KAHLAN IN HIS BLUE SHIRT! I may or may not have an obsession with that!!! Just Kahlan in anything of his is sexy. Kahlan in anything is sexy LOL! But that. Yes. I have to admit. That. I love. So it needed to be put in. :)

SOSOSOSOOOOO glad you liked it! :D I hope to eventually revamp this whole thing. I really just want to go back through, maybe make it into a chapter fic or something, so I can explore their feelings and the separation more as well as the whole Whisper thing.

Oh and, NEVER BE SORRY FOR SPAMMMM! I LOVE IT! :D I don't get nearly enough of it! You're awesome for taking the time to read and comment! <33 MUCH LOVE. :D

[lotslovercss]

You SO have to go back and make this multi-chapter fic! You could have so much fun with this.

I just love the whole idea. *GUH!* Very awesome!

And I love your fics so yah, I'll read and comment! You can count on me!

Much love back at ya, bb! :D

[mcc2040]

I will!! At some point! I still have a multi-chapter fic to post. I lost the first three chapters of it, so I can't post until I find those. (Or re-type them up, I wrote an entire chapter fic out in 2 notebooks..>_>) After that gets up, then yeah! I will definitely start on this. Working on a couple BONC and RONK one shots at the moment.

I have to catch up on your fics! Whenever I am all caught up its like you guys post more and I'm like KJDSHGDJSFHDJS READ, COMMENT, READ OR COMMENT, BOTH? I AM LAZY. X'D

[lotslovercss]

2 NOTEBOOKS!! Whoa! That's going to be awesome. Can't wait for you to post that.

No worries. My fics will always be there! :D