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[mc_fanfiction]

my first fanfiction

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Blaney Greenleaf

[blaneygreenleaf]

This was interesting, but it could definitely use some work. The plot line seems to be good but you need to take a look at your style, grammar and tense. You need to find yourself a beta, and a grammar check. If you need any help I have some experience betaing het... namely Lafeemechante's award winning series fics as well as some other one shots and scene pieces, so write me at blaney_greenleaf2@yahoo.ca and put Blaney in the subject box. I'll do anything I can to help.

[babydracky]

Ok, I've already read it at ff.net, but I want to say that I really like this story because I'm fond of vampires!!!!!!!! I like how you describe Draco as a vampire!!! He'll be a "good" vampire!!!
I suppose that you like Lestat, don't you?