12/100 To an end

[mbsugarsweet]

To an end
Author: MBSugarSweet
Rating: G
Character(s): Mal/River
Set: #3
Prompt: #12 Weird Science
Summary: Mal worries about River... And then about his duties as Captain.

Comments

[ertheuponerthe]

Looks like I didn't have to wait long, lol. Someone should really knock some sense into Mal. I loved this part, keep 'em coming.

[faythbrady]

No! No no no no, Mal can't leave Serenity . . . unless he wants to be become a stripper-- i'm sure that's allowed under some Captainy code. Maybe he could pole dance . . . and then River could use the pole to bash him upsides the head to stop being such a Gorram dumbass-- seriously, it's a wonder this guy EVER gets laid.

[mbsugarsweet]

ROOOOOFL! I would be okay with a little pole dancing from Mal. I'm hoping to get him shirtless soon, but he's being stubborn. Something about liking clothes or some such. I'm hoping River does kick his ass... He could use the wake up call. I just hope it ends well!

[anonymous]

I just found your series, and I LOVE it!!! Mal is just being a big boob, and he is torturing River in the process. By the time he realizes what he wants, it might not be available anymore if he isn't careful. Thanks for posting so frequently, and I'll be watching for more! :)

[mbsugarsweet]

Thank you!!!! I'm glad you're enjoying it and that you found it! I am one of those readers who likes everything all at once, so I find that I write like that, too! I just want it all out there so I don't have to stop between chapters! Too bad imagination doesn't work like that all the time, huh? Mine kind of short-circuits sometimes. It can get quite frustrating. LOL! Thank you again for reading and for taking the time to comment! I hope you enjoy the [many] chapters to come!

[gwenfrewi72]

Argh! Mal wants to leave Serenity. You're killing me. Oh my stars, I hope there's another chapter out their waiting for me. You've got me on the edge of my seat waiting for these stories.

[mbsugarsweet]

Darling, you are just too good for my self-esteem for words!! Thank you for commenting on my chapters. It does my ego (and my imagination) good to read such nice comments. I think I anticipate your responses almost as much as I anticipate writing these chapters! And that means a lot to me. So thank you.

[gwenfrewi72]

Hmm, I think I anticipate the next chapters more than you. Soo?? Where's my next chapter??

[mbsugarsweet]

Being written! Hopefully it goes well. Wish me luck!

[missrose54]

*beating mal on the head with a stick* that man has some serious issues.

[mbsugarsweet]

ROFL!!!! Agreed!