Poetry: Again

Sep 02, 2008 10:30

Assignment two: complete the simile, be creative

tired as a college student during an 8 am class
hot as the muzzle of an AK47 after a gunfight
waves unfurled like whipped cream on a Earl's cake
after shelling the town it looked as if it had been made out of Swiss cheese
disgusting as messy adult diapers
the child trembled like a rickety old pick-up truck
the airplane rose like a wounder bird
black as the bottom of a hill-jacks feet
he entered the room like a drunken donkey
their lovemaking was like the rubbing together of a pair of dead fish

not as fun as my last entry, but still, I thought I would share.

emo poetry

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