Critique Post

[mayusuki]

I want to be a better Daryan player, and even if very few people know about his character, I totally don't mind any critiques! Please, if you have any thoughts or whatever, let me know. I'll probably make one for the rest of my characters.

Comments

[snackoos_ftw]

YOU SUCK.

[my_fingerpoints]

MY BALLS >:U

[my_fingerpoints]

Haha, I am so clever.

:|

I'm matchin' your icon, birch. ...Kind of.

[snackoos_ftw]

...Oh wow, Hanshi. You're totally my new hero now, just because YOU'RE SO FAILTASTIC. ♥

HELLS YEAH GLASSES and did you just call me a type of tree?

[my_fingerpoints]

But at least you admited that I am your hero. >:U

SUNGLASSES ARE STILL GLASSES. And....

[snackoos_ftw]

...Lol. Go catch up on your lame internet slang or whatever, birch.

Well, guess what? I TAKE IT BACK. ♥

SO IM NOT COOL ENOUGH FOR YOU?!

[my_fingerpoints]

IS THAT IT, EMA? >:C

DID YOU HONESTLY THINK THAT SOMEONE AS AWESOME AS I WOULD LOOK UP TO YOU? Lol... YEAH RIGHT.

[snackoos_ftw]

...IS WHAT IT, MR. WRIGHT? AND WHY ARE YOU LOOKING AT ME LIKE THAT, S-SOB.

YES >8|

[my_fingerpoints]

IS THAT WHAT YOU REALLY THINK OF ME? I'M NOT YOUR HERO ANYMORE?! *stifles manly tears*

Well, YOU THOUGHT WRONG.

[snackoos_ftw]

...M-MR. WRIGHT! YOU KNOW THAT YOU'RE STILL MY HERO! DDDDDDDDD: I LOVE YOU ALMOST AS MUCH AS I LOVE MY PRECIOUS BOTTLE OF LUMINOL. REALLY, I DO!

Lol, manly tears. PHOENIX YOU PANSY.

N-No! I'm NEVER wrong! I'M WRIGHT *bricked*

[my_fingerpoints]

OH I'M SO GLAD TO KNOW THAT I AM AS PRECIOUS AS A BOTTLE OF LIQUID :C

OH AND HAY SARA REPLYED TO OUR THREAD IN DAISYCHAIN? :D

...AT LEAST YOU TRIED. XD

[science_ftw]

IT'S NOT JUST LIQUID, MR. WRIGHT! IT'S LUMINOL~!

...I FORGOT ABOUT THAT. DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD: Oh God, I fail. ANYWAY. So... are you going to reply to it or what?

It's gotta count for something ;A;

[my_fingerpoints]

I'M LESSER THAN LUMINOL?! ;;;;A;;;;

LOLOLOL IT'S OK. Well, I was thinking about an order like Daryan > Sara > Ema, since her reply can go to either of them. But if you want, I can go ahead and reply to it. Or vice versa WHATEVS ♥

I'll give you like... .1/4 of a point for the effort.

[snackoos_ftw]

.................M-MAYBE I LOVE YOU A LITTLE BIT MORE THAN I LOVE LUMINOL? :D

I'll go ahead and reply~. I need to go do SOMETHING, because I'm... procrastinating on starting up a log over there, orz. Stfu, those things are HARD TO THINK OF.

Re: I'll give you like... .1/4 of a point for the effort.

[my_fingerpoints]

AWESOME /o/♥

:D OK! Ahahaha, yeah it totally seems like it. I'd probably take forever and a freaking half to think up of one.