Part 1: I like it! Part 2: I'm nervous!

[maynard256]

So... it's obvious that it was my first time. I'll just finish the job tomorrow; you know, let her rest for a little while. I'm delighted that I now know how to do it, though. Next time she needs it, it'll be cake. :-) Hooray for learning new things!

Now here's the dirty-dirt-dirt poem. I'm not sure if it sucks or not, but it's the first one in a while, and the first attempt at this kind of poem in like, years. I'm nervous to let someone read it. Heh, I just thought of this: It'd be completely entertaining if some militant feminist randomly found my journal and read it.

OMG!!! I'm objectifying myself!!!

Attack me
with the carnal appetite
that drives animals.

Hit me
where it will hurt the most.
Just rip and tear my flesh,
and go in for the kill.

Pin me down;
go for the jugular,
and I will succumb.

Make me scream out,
then lose my voice,
then lose my breath.
Eat me ravenously.

I will claw and scratch,
but don't let that slow you.
Just keep going.

Don't
stop to savor anything...
there's enough meat
to last a lifetime.