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:/ And here is my contribution to the Beast/B2st fandom.
Title: Time Changes
Author: mayawelstead
Pairing: Junhyung/Hyunseung and G-Dragon/Hyunseung
Rating: R/NC-17
Word Count: 1830
Note: Prompt by lackofsound . She told me: "Hyunseung/Junhyung. Plus GD. HS's old lover and his new one! :D" and somehow it ends up 1830 words when I was trying to drabble. Enjoy!
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Title: Time Changes
Author: mayawelstead
Pairing: Junhyung/Hyunseung and G-Dragon/Hyunseung
Rating: R/NC-17
Word Count: 1830
Note: Prompt by lackofsound . She told me: "Hyunseung/Junhyung. Plus GD. HS's old lover and his new one! :D" and somehow it ends up 1830 words when I was trying to drabble. Enjoy!
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"any little pocket of time that could be called theirs" awwww D:
also the image of Jiyong and Hyunseung going to the movies is SO CUTE ;_;
I love how "cycle" implies its sort of inevitable; like, Hyunseung's got a choice about it all, but really...IT'S ~FATE ok.
"Junhyung was vibrant, smooth skinned and harsh-tongued, his confidence a mirror of Jiyong's" sadkfgdsg I love this sentence so much, ok, YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW. and the rest of the paragraph too! IT'S SO GORGEOUS. especially how it ends with such a short sentence; it's really powerful.
asfagvsgdv the next paragraph. that is so Junhyungggg omg. and I still love how evocative it all is, especially words like "pliable". although I really flailed with the phrase "taking it for himself" idk, ok, maybe I just really like the idea of Junhyung being subtly domineering or something. "With Junhyung it always felt like being suspended in a different reality where no one could ever go - a silent licking flame, like the one emitted by schoolroom Bunsens. Junhyung made him the centre of his world; in the way that Jiyong took up all the space in Hyunseung's own." these two sentences are possibly my favourites in the whole thing. POSSIBLY. or possibly I just love it all. :D
"he started reaching for patterns in hair only to find long blonde bangs instead" it's seriously like, awwwww Hyunseung. D:
and this line: "probably the only normal jeans Jiyong owned" is still hilarious. :D
"they both understood that Jiyong's love was not tiny and limited; he was perfectly capable of offering them both a part of him." kasjdgfagvva this, so much. and not just for the story; for life in general, I just want to throw this line in front of people and be like, "SEE." idk.
ahaa at the SHINee joke. :D you are funny, ok. :D
aww they love eachother, they do. ;_;
Hyunseung's such a drama queen. locking everyone out! how rude. it still fits him though.
"He was reportedly not the most sensitive member of his group, after all" hahaha poor Gikwang. he really does seem like. an idiot sometimes.
"Now, though, discovering his desire had become monogomous without his permission, it just felt awkward to be alone with him." aww I just love this line, idk why.
"In that time Hyunseung had sex with no one but himself, and failed to avoid fantasies (memories) of smooth skin beneath his hand, smirking lips below his ear, even simple visions of smiling eyes behind thick-rimmed glasses were enough to turn him on." that is hot, ok, Ish, it really is. *_*
I also love that you used "reparation". IDK YOU ARE JUST SO SMART.
"eyes dark with anger. Probably anger" I just love the probably. idk it amuses me. :D
"It was too close for his sanity but the hands holding his shoulders were forceful." forceful Junhyung is hot, ok. for some reason I just love how you've put this sentence together.
"a tongue shoving itself in in a display of dominance Junhyung didn't usually assert" I'm not sure if this is what you were meanng, but I like to read it as an implication that Hyunseung is sort of, submissive? more like, eager to please and stuff, because he would've learnt that going with the flow is much easier than resistance. or maybe. idk. I just like it.
"Hyunseung brought his hands up to push at Junhyung's wrists but somehow they ended up staying there, wrapped securely to keep him close." I love any and all mentions of wrists *_*
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"It didn't seem like he needed to, however, as Junhyung started lipping and biting at his jaw. Hyunseung's head fell back - tension from a month of restraining himself washed out of him and he let his friend (finally) do what he wanted with his body. His lover, even, he dared to think." mm that is a pretty image, ok.
ah, I love Yoseob. he seriously seems like the happiest guy ever or something.
", they had remained clothed and kissing for so long. It was hardly even sexual. Just closeness and Hyunseung felt his heart reluctantly swell at the idea that they could be that kind of couple - a couple content to makeout for the pleasure alone instead of only being an act of foreplay." aww, gorgeous. I love that with the idea that they could be that kind of couple comes the implication that they've got a future - it;s not all immediate pleasure and such, it's about companionship and being together. awww!
"A smile broke his face in two and his fingers shakily rose to Junhyung's lips where the mark of his presence was clearly evident. Perhaps this was the start of what he'd wanted all along. He read his awe reflected back to him before turning back to practice. They would have plenty of time to sort it out. Hyunseung would make sure of that." BEST ENDING EVERRRRRRRR ok I am so glad it is happy. (althought it would be a better ending if it NEVER ENDED ok, stories like these should go on forever~!) gnahr I LOVE YOU SO MUCH <333 times a MAJILLION, this story is so awesome
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