[FANFIC] If it matters

Jun 07, 2011 20:10

Pairing: Jaejoong/Changmin
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst / Romance
Summary: Jaejoong’s a puzzle, Changmin wants to solve him.

“JaeMin” )

t_t, what is this?, changmin eats a lot, are you sure this is a fanfic?, idc about you tags, jaejoong likes yunho, i fail

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maxism12 June 7 2011, 16:11:33 UTC
pikasu June 7 2011, 16:18:32 UTC
LAUGHS AT YOU

DIDN'T IT TURN OUT HOMIN?

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pikasu June 7 2011, 16:26:13 UTC
his white tank sticking to his well defined body and in a heated conversation with Yoochun.

CRYING JAECHUN MOMENT IM SORRY

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pikasu June 7 2011, 16:48:49 UTC
OKAY I SEE THE YUNJAE AND THE HOMIN NOW.
LAUGHS AT YOU MORE.

but okay on a more ~serious note~ - omg i love this T___T i like your characterization of changmin, and omg yunho is like a two-timer or something in here lolol sobs. ;;;

there is something very dark about him and Changmin doesn’t like it but they end up in a group together and Changmin doesn’t talk to him for the first three months.

they say people’s eyes are windows to their souls, Changmin thinks that the windows to Jaejoong’s soul are closed and it always was.

hangmin watches how Jaejoong fits into Yunho, fits so perfectly; Changmin turns on his heels and walks off, his head storming with thoughts of whether or not Jaejoong would look perfect under him
crying yunjae but omg changmin cries more

He watches how subtly Jaejoong and Yunho throw hints at each other and flirt with each other and touch each other and stand by each other when there is no camera and Changmin thinks it’s normal that he wants to kick Yunho every now and then. CHANGMIN THE COCKBLOCKER SINCE ( ... )

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maxism12 June 7 2011, 16:12:17 UTC
chun_ji June 7 2011, 16:41:27 UTC
mine :D

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maxism12 June 7 2011, 17:10:55 UTC
and you told me I failed.

(see below for proof)

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changmin eats a lot chun_ji June 7 2011, 16:59:44 UTC
why must you and pikasu put the image of dbsk boys smoking into my head ;______; /fans self

he’s beautiful and delicate, he sings like there is nothing else he can do and he cooks to prove it’s false, he’s wrong in the right way
wow your characterization of jaejoong is stunning, you obviously know him very intrinsically and you really captured his quirkiness and his insecurity and his beauty. the way you put words together, i've never seen anything like it ;~;

he is perfect in every imperfect way
brb quoting this line everywhere forever. so heartbreaking and gorgeous and unexpected and guhh. amazing line ♥_♥

Changmin thinks there is nothing more freeing then Jaejoong’s smile.
changmin's desire for jaejoong that is verging on addiction and unhealthiness, you put it into words perfectly. the impossibility and longing in your every word tears my heart apart :(

Changmin swears he can see Jaejoong in Yunho’s eyes.

Changmin can’t sleep, can’t eat, can’t sing, can’t breathe Jaejoong frees him, Jaejoong eases himoh my gosh, favourite line in ( ... )

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nocturnes June 8 2011, 02:36:38 UTC
Oh god this made me so nostalgic for old DBSK. Between this and the interview Yunho did on Strong Heart... gah. My heart is fluttering all over the place. This sort of style reminds me a lot of the fic that used to be around fandom a lot, and I mean that in the best possible way. ♥

This is my favourite characterization of Changmin, too, all awkward angles and shy smiles and not knowing what to say. ;___; YunJae were so good together here too, hnnngh.

Thank you for this. :)

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maxism12 June 8 2011, 10:35:44 UTC
This sort of style reminds me a lot of the fic that used to be around fandom a lot,

OMG THAT COULD BE THE BEST COMPLIMENT EVER /treasures it for eternity♥

Just the other day I was complaining to my friend about how no one ever writes dbsk like how they used and this made me so happy, I can't even - sobbles.

I like awkward!Changmin too, he's a nice character to write on =>

I'm glad you liked this, thank you for commenting ♥

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anihimesama June 8 2011, 10:40:02 UTC
this is so good, i really like Changmin's emotion here. But i think it's more YunJae*and a lil bit Homin* than Jaemin .

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maxism12 June 8 2011, 11:26:54 UTC
Thank you ♥

Yeah, I realized ='( But this is more like one sided!Jaemin.

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anihimesama June 8 2011, 12:34:39 UTC
so i think that you should give a warning about that :)

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