Can't what?

[max_deeer]

Title: Can't what?
Pairings: HoMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Buttsex
Summary: Yunho's in a relationship with Jaejoong, so Changmin doesn't think they should keep having sex. Spoiler alert! They do. ;D
Genre: PWP

Comments

[brilliessence]

very...educational...for all homin lovers *_________*

you just about blew my brains out, you know? (hahaha you know U-know Yunho, get it?) *shot* ::dead::

write more smut, please~~ *feeds your muse*

[max_deeer]

Uwah~~!!!!! I are inspired!!! Lovlelovle on you!!! Yes! Thankksss!!!

[doma_arsonica]

I have this thing for struggling, but willing Min. Yunho and his dirty talk..sigh. That's all you need. JaehoMin? is there a possibility for a part two? ;]

[max_deeer]

Yes, it's possible!!! Yunho talking dirty is so.. *_* I want it~!!!

[zhe01]

educational indeed.

min represents a fish in this fic.

O.O OoO O.o OoO o.o OoO o.O OoO!! ......O.O;;;;;;;;;;;

i did like the end LOL

[max_deeer]

lol I just imagine him flopping around in shallow water. XD

[zhe01]

*sweatdrop* LOL

[anyappellation]

honestly, I would be embarrassed too DSLDKFLS XD

BUT THIS IS GOOD DON'T WORRY. And exclamation points should be used only sparingly so, don't worry so much about that. anyway.

Something about Min bottoming turns me on lmao. :D and yunho being all dominant :P Uh, IDK what to say since PWP stuff isn't exactly the kind of thing I read too often. But yes, this is really good. :DDDDDD

[max_deeer]

Ah, thank you for reading and commenting this time. It means a lot!! As soon as I read 'don't worry', I felt such relief.. Haha. ^^ Thanks!

[under_an_oak]

LOL, your first smut? Really? It's pretty good. Erm...saying "keep up the good work" sounds a little wrong when it's about improving your smut-writing skills but..."keep up the good work!"

PS: And I'd love to read the JaeMin XD

[max_deeer]

I'll work really hard and improve and write a really much better JaeMin!! .. Yes!!! Thank you so so much.

.. I still haven't even got the courage to read over this~. But these comments make me feel so much less embarassed. Yes, thank you..