First comment of semester 2

[matthewj_1987]

comment on ellisa's ljhey there ellisa, what a beautifullu stirrying poem you have written here. the way u have connected deeply with the theme of the war poetry we have been reading for the past two weeks is truly mesmorising.

the final stanza evokes such a feeling in me, i am almost moved to tears, what a beautiful sadness u have portrayed here.

i hope to see more of this agian

much love... matt