If you say so (Final chapter)

Jun 06, 2017 22:58

Title: If you say so
Author: Matsuaurore
Banner: Lilisan31 <3
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ohmiya, Sakumoto
Genre: Au, angst, romance, drama
Summary: Nino and Ohno were living a life full of happiness and love until Nino ran away for a mysterious reason, leaving only a letter to his boyfriend who was decided to pursue him until the end of the world.


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genre: au, rating: nc-17, length: chaptered, drama, angst, pairing: ohmiya, romance

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antimiya88 June 13 2017, 12:25:11 UTC
OMG I was sure that I had left a comment before... I guess it's because I'm getting older! xDD

Soooooo this chapter was LONG and I loved that!!! You know how much I love long chapters!! And if I could describe it with one word I would call it rollercoaster!
In the first part all I wanted to do was to send Suzuka to hell. I could tell that she was an egoist who looked at Satoshi as some kind of trophy... But you didn't give me the chance to hate her completely, even if I can't forgive her for her behavior.
Now... Satoshi. I will repeat once again what I had told you when we met up. Ohno was stupid. He didn't love her, yet he wasn't taking precautions. And of course they were a while together and of course she had said she was on a pill. First of all, if you want to zero your chances you have to always wear protection since there's no 100% protection mode and it's also a matter of health. Satoshi was sleeping with other men as well so there would always be the chance of having caught some sexual disease - even minor - I'm a bit too sensitive on that matter... :) Of course I'm happy that he had Kazuya but immediately he was "condemned" to live a life he didn't really like!!! Though I think his second chance came with Nino!
Now... Nino. You know how much I love Nino in this fic BUT I think that when they slept together it would make him realize some things. He spoke with Suzuka, Ohno was also clear with him telling him that he'd break up and above all that he'd be happy only if he was by his side. Deep inside he knows it as well but I think that more than being afraid for Ohno's career - when Ohno himself doesn't care much, he's afraid of himself. I feel that he hasn't accepted who he is after he got blind and doesn't want to let Ohno see him and live with him under these new conditions. He'd be an egoist in a way to leave Ohno once again because that would hurt the latter even more than the first time. I think, as I told you yesterday, that Ohno should go and find him and FINALLY make him realize that their only chance to be truthfully happy is to be together!!! They belong together!!!

I'll read the epilogue now and I hope I won't start cursing in my room for this story's ending!!!! *throws you a warning look*

It's an essay but couldn't help it! xP

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matsuaurore June 13 2017, 12:33:35 UTC
xDDDD I always love your essay xD

Don't worry, Ohno always used protections when he slept with other men xD He just trusted Suzuka too quickly and was too naïve xD
Suzuka wasn't that bad even if she made some mistakes but she tried to make it up in the end :)
For Nino, I'll let you read the epilogue, I just can say he is indeed scared to be with Ohno because of his state ;)
Thank you for this lovely and very long comment my dear <3

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