Umi no shizukesa (the ocean's silence) chapter 1

[matsuaurore]

Title: Umi no shizukesa (the ocean's silence)
Author: MatsuAurore
Pairings: Juntoshi, Sakuraiba (side pairing)
Length: multichapter
Rating: NC-17 for this chapter.
Genre: Au, romance, drama, angst
Disclaimer: I only own the plot T.T but Jun owns Ohno's body xD sorry for the mistakes but english is not my first language and my nee-chan was too busy to check it

Comments

[mokohno]

Euh... I want to say it's great, but can I? This chapter is sad!! Poor Toshi getting raped in his school O_O That was harsh! T_T
Well no, I mean I really like it and I can't wait to see what happens next!!!! =) They're going to do diving! I never read a fiction about diving before!!!! (Yeah => http://25.media.tumblr.com/7291446e738c3ad55d957bd017a2ae57/tumblr_mi5dgeWAzR1reol8uo3_1280.png)

Anyway, that's probably the most I can do, you know me >< I can't comment on fictions except from saying it's good ^^""""

Par contre j'étais déçue que tu me demandes pas de la corriger u_u Oui oui, j'étais triste même... Ouai u_u *La Yama était pas corrigée non plus, si? Oups! (Oui je l'ai lu mais vraiment! Je suis désolée, mais j'ai rien compris! ><"""" Il faut que tu m'expliques hein!)*

[matsuaurore]

Merci Emma <3 ça me fait plaisir que tu commentes et que tu ais aimé ^^, je t'ai pas demandé de la checker parce que je pensais pas que tu le voudrais, je sais que mon anglais n'égale pas le tien et je savais que t'aurais envie de le faire xD mais, si tu veux, je peux te filer la suite et tu la checkera ^^ pour la yama, amanda me l'avais checkée et elle a pas eu de pb a comprendre, faudra qu'on en parle ce midi xD en tout cas je suis ravie que tu aimes ce juntoshi et que tu l'ais commenté arigatou <3<3<3<3<3

[kiriezero]

ahhh, so much pain and angst and suffering T.T ~ I love it! :P
I love angsty fics, my heart suffers reading them but I still love them! XD I hope Jun will be able to heal Ohno.
Thanks for sharing it! looking forward to next chapter (and the future fluffiness of juntoshi <3)

[matsuaurore]

I'm glad you loved it ^^ yes, there will be lot of angst in this fic because I like it too xD thanks for reading and comment ^^

[tempestade_13]

Poor Ohno, so much suffering.
Yamada is hateful, should be punished.
Jun to the rescue.
Thank you for writing Juntoshi and for sharing .
Waiting for the next

[matsuaurore]

yes, I hate Yamada too, he is such a bastard with our poor Ohchan T.T thanks for reading ^^

[adeyakana]

this is sad :(
poor Ohno
I'm curious about what happen with his voice
looking forward by next :)

[matsuaurore]

^^ glad you liked it, you'll see what will happen xD thanks for your comment ^^

[senna23]

how dare him touch Ohno like that! It was horrible >.< Poor ohno~
Jun saving him may be the start...I hope he can speak...

great story, update soon~

[matsuaurore]

eh eh, I hate Yamada too, he is very horrible, but Jun will be there for his Ohchan ^^ thanks for reading ^^