Lie to me (5/?)

Jul 31, 2014 19:20

Title: Lie to me
Author: MatsuAurore
Pairings: Ohmiya, Junba
Genre: Au, drama, romance, angst, psychology
Summary: Nino is a doctor. His specialty? Finding the lies in the criminal's eyes and their behavior. Nobody can lie to him but one day, Nino discovers that maybe there is one person able to read him as an open book and can beat him on his specialty. Now ( Read more... )

genre: au, psychology, pairing: junba, rating: pg-13, drama, angst, romance

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lilisan31 July 31 2014, 17:22:32 UTC
*Réservé*

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matsuaurore July 31 2014, 17:23:40 UTC
xDDDD

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lilisan31 July 31 2014, 23:07:32 UTC
Well.. C'était une agréable surprise, j'aime ce Kazu égoïste avec une langue de vipère mais, profondément gentil et quelque peu fragile.. Nyyyaaa ! Et puis, Oh'chan !! Je n'hésiterai pas a le plaquer au sol perso ! xD ( ... )

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matsuaurore August 1 2014, 06:59:11 UTC
ouais ils sont cute ensemble dans ce chap, surtout quand ils sont bourrés chez nino xD je me suis bien marrée à écrire ça xD en fait les deux ont des souffrances passées et c'est ce qui va les rapprocher et les pousser ensemble au final mais c'est vrai qu'ohchan est trop en quête de réponses qui ne le concernent pas xD
nino va bien le martyriser dans le prochain chap, le soucis, c'est qu'ohchan va pas se laisser faire et lui rendre la monnaie de sa pièce xD tout ça va finir par partir en cacahuète si ils ne se décident pas à coucher ensemble xD enfin ça par en cacahuète dans le chap 7, je l'écrit trop à l'envers cette fic, j'ai casi fini le dernier chap mais je réécris les chap précédents quand ça me convient plus xD
wait with patience for the next chapter ;) merci pour le com :)

ps/ tu comprends pk je pouvais pas te donner la preview de celui-ci, parce qu'ils couchaient pas ensemble finalement xD

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ryusa July 31 2014, 17:35:40 UTC
somehow I'm relieve with this!!
it's not a hot smutty chapter but it's so sweet and funny..
I love ohmiya here!!!! (>________<)
thanks for updating... ^_____^

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matsuaurore July 31 2014, 18:56:51 UTC
xD I'm happy you liked it anyway :) thank you for reading and commenting :)

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littlebadlei July 31 2014, 18:32:48 UTC
MUAHAHAHAHAHHAHHA XDDDD

go oh-chaaaan!!! i'm so in love with ohno in this series xD gosh.....
and satopi x3 oh nino, don't try to deny your desire of him x9

and poor ninooo.... you can talk about it with him... he will kiss your problems away~
jun being cute too x3x

thanks for writing!! you should have seen my face when i saw that you have updated this X9 (maybe it's a good thing that you didn't see)

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matsuaurore July 31 2014, 18:58:47 UTC
xDDD I would have loved to see your face xD It's great when readers are happy to have their chapter :) I also love ohchan here, he is so funny xD nino and ohchan are so stubborn in this fic, you will need patience to have them together xD thank you for your sweet comment <3

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littlebadlei August 1 2014, 09:07:32 UTC
nono, i really do believe it would be better not to see it xDDDD
(even i could think how did my eyes look that time... the flash...)
well then, i will learn to be patience then! >x)
was it sweet? well you're welcome then x3

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matsuaurore August 1 2014, 09:10:41 UTC
xD I'm sure it was very funny the face you made xD
yes, sorry, you have to patient :D

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atenea005 July 31 2014, 18:52:30 UTC
thank you for update!! but next will be from Hawai?!WOW are you going?!!!I'd like to go but It's imposible :( I can't;( I wish I had vacation to those dates, well...I'll wait for next!!:D bye!!

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matsuaurore July 31 2014, 19:00:41 UTC
I have to thank my parents because I'm going because of them :) they wanted to go to hawaï so, I'm going with them happily and not just for arashi, hawaï seems very beautiful :) thank you for reading and commenting :)

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akhikaru July 31 2014, 19:58:41 UTC
Oh, no sex this time!!! *pouts* Hahahaha I actually love how they tease each other without having sex, so it's okay... by now :P
I loved their interactions in this chapter :D Especially at the end!!! That kiss, OMG!!!
Now I wanna know what happened to Nino... it's intriguing~
Ah! I loved this line: This man was just too weird. If he didn't exist, we would have to create him
xDDDDD I laughed out loud when I read it.
Thanks very much for the update ^___^ I can't wait for next chapter~

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matsuaurore August 1 2014, 07:02:38 UTC
xD sorry for the no sxe part here xD they need more time to sleep together and more teasing :P but I'm happy you liked it anyway :) nino has very deep scars that don't want to heal :( maybe ohchan is his solution xD
yes, we use this expression a lot in France, when someone is very funny xD
thank you for reading and commenting dear :)

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