Bodies exchange (chapter 5)

Jul 28, 2013 13:22

Title: Bodies exchange
Author: MatsuAurore
Pairings: Ohmiya, Junba (side pairing ( Read more... )

rating: r, pairing: junba, drama, fantasy, romance

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himitsu_17 July 28 2013, 13:01:15 UTC
T-T

Please have a nice trip and don't forget us waiting to read more!

You totally stopped at the ''wrong'' time xD

Thanks

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matsuaurore July 29 2013, 02:09:10 UTC
XD don't worry, I won't forget you, I'm at Mo^scow for the moment, I'm waiting for my second plane xD I know the cut was mean but it's for the suspence xD thank you for reading and commenting ^^

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mkmoonlight July 28 2013, 13:50:06 UTC
I can't imagine what in the world happened between O-chan and his ex-boyfriend to make it so bad for the "fake O-chan" to "make-up" with him and have sex...
I felt like the scene where O-chan gives his long speech about how Nino betrayed him was kind of unnatural. I think that rather that O-chan giving a long speech, it would have been more in his character to say nothing at all and/or just push him away, and Nino would find out how much he hurt O-chan because of Jun(as Jun seems like he would love to do this). In the state O-chan was in, I don't think he would have the energy to talk anyway.
I'm glad that this is more of a drama and not a comedy, because I love when things get emotional.~
Thanks for the awesome update!

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matsuaurore July 29 2013, 02:13:14 UTC
well, I think ohchan can be talkative when he is trully hurt, after all, nino went too far and he has to explain his feelings for one time in his life xD you'll understand later why ohchan talked like that, nino really went far this time! I'm glad you liked drama, I also prefer drama than comedy xD thank you for reading and commenting ^^

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running_arashi July 28 2013, 23:23:45 UTC
;;A;; what a sad chapter. Now you have to go for your trip and we're left here hanging without your mercy at all. What happened between ohno and kenta?? I'm dying to knooooow!!

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matsuaurore July 29 2013, 02:15:04 UTC
XD don't worry, I'll continue to post every week because I'll have internet xD and this fic is already over xD (I only have the end of the last chapter to write xD) what happened between them? hummm you'll see xDDD thank you very much for reading and commebting ^.^

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riidaaisbest July 29 2013, 02:14:26 UTC
Kazu is being a big idiot here. He completely explodes on Ohno for doing hardly anything but goes ahead and sleeps with Kenta twice? If Satoshi decides to give up entirely, I wouldn't blame him!

But, you had to stop at that point D:? I really want to know what happened between Kenta & Ohno! It had to be very bad to affect Ohno for so long...

Please update very soon!!

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matsuaurore July 29 2013, 02:17:25 UTC
XDDD well, nino is a trully asshole in this fic even if I love nino, I like to write him this way (or maybe I just love to torture ohchan xD) sorry for this cut, you'll learn later what happened between ohno and kenta, and yes, it was a very bad thing ^^ thank you for reading and commenting ^^

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