A broken promise (chapter 7)

[matsuaurore]

Title: A broken promise
Author: MatsuAurore
Beta: Sakudada <3
Pairing: Yama
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Au, drama, angst, romance
Disclaimer: Sho owns Ohchan xD
Summary: You were alone, you were so sad. Everybody thought nothing could touch you but they were wrong. You were the only one who was able to read people's heart and understand them when they just said you were

Comments

a broken promise

[akemi_can]

ouch...
what a cruel people they are..
and yes sho, they deserve to be punished...
but...
did you really need to kill them by yourself??
hope it doesn't give you another problem...
seem like another chap will be angst ne~~~~ ^^

Re: a broken promise

[matsuaurore]

XD Shos is very angry, ne?! yes, there is a bit of angst in the next chapter ^^

[ohno_haru]

I love the way this story, reminds me of my students are like this *like Ochan on this story*, makes me can not wait for the next story.

I'm waiting for the next story^^
thanks for sharing^^

[matsuaurore]

thank youuuu ^^ I'm glad you like it, this fic is a bit violent, with Ohchan's rape and his problem but I love to torture my ichibans xD thank you for reading and commentng ^^

[kk4food]

That's terrible >.<
Poor O-chan. I'm glad he has Sho now. Hope Sho can help him get over this nightmare.
I wonder what Sho is going to do.

[matsuaurore]

Sho is really really angry and he won't let Ohcan's father and uncle escape like that, an angry Sho is very scaring xD thanks for reading and commenting ^^

[ohno_haru]

I understand how you feel the love torturing Ochan because it is good for a Ochan tortured, but it was too violent.T^T
poor my ichiban T^T
your welcome^^
I'm waiting for the sequel^^

[matsuaurore]

yes, to be honest, I didn't know if I could post this chpater because of the rape by his father but...unluckily, this kind of case exists and to make sho very very angry, I needed a very horrible past, I think it would be the last where I write this kind of past xD too horrible and very hard to read xD

[toups_nino]

J'aime toujours autant cette fic ... Même si le passé de Toshi apparaît de plus en plus obscur.
Déjà que son père le battait, alors si en plus il le violait ... Quelle horreur ! Pauvre Toshi, il a tellement souffert toutes ces années ... Heureusement qu'il a trouvé Sho ^^.
Mais je sais pas si c'est une très bonne idée pour Sho d'aller trouver les 2 hommes ... surtout avec un flingue ... Je veux pas qu'il lui arrive des bricoles non plus. Ok, il est en colère et il y a de quoi ! Je comprend très bien qu'il est envie de tués ces salopards (parce que moi aussi !) mais j'ai peur que ça lui retombe dessus après ...
Hâte de lire la suite !!
Gros bisous !

[matsuaurore]

XD ouais, j'ai meme hesité a ecrire le passage du viol mais je me.suis dit qu'il fallait vraiment un truc horrible pour que nohno soit autant traumatisé xD apres ouais, sho est super en colere qu'on ait osé toucher a son satoshi donc la colere l'aveugle et tout ce qu'il souhaite c'est se venger maintenant xD merci pour ton comm <3