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Icarus, in Love

Jan 12, 2010 00:45

Title: Icarus, in Love
Fandom: 2PM, Wooyoung, Chansung
Rating: G
Summary: "What did the sun think as Icarus fell to his death?"
Notes: thanks to solesakuma and essyllus for the beta and help :)

( Did you ever wish you could fly? )

chansung, 2pm, wooyoung

Comments 24

smugly_smooth January 12 2010, 22:40:16 UTC

This is absolutely lovely <33
I'm impressed that so much can be said in such little space and length. The dialogue between them is meaningful, and so heartbreaking.
Lovely work ^^

mrsatterthwaite January 13 2010, 06:43:15 UTC

thank you! the scene just kind of hit me in the face, so I'm glad it came through :D

papillon_dream January 13 2010, 01:46:52 UTC

really...♥
its subtle, soft and really beautiful

thanks for the fab read

mrsatterthwaite January 13 2010, 06:43:50 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading :)

thevignette January 13 2010, 02:39:41 UTC

i love how subtle this is ♥ some parts that i really, really liked: A gentle breeze ran through his hair, and he felt himself leaning with the wind. He kept his feet on the concrete, locking his knees and gripping the floor with curled toes and Chansung wrapped his arms tighter around Wooyoung's waist, as if he could contain him with raw strength and will.

mrsatterthwaite January 13 2010, 06:46:29 UTC

ah, I'm so flattered at your comment! Especially since I really liked the fic you just posted :) That last line is one of my favorites, too! Thanks so much for your comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

wildjelleh January 13 2010, 03:25:14 UTC

How tragic the tale of Icarus that it captures the vulnerability of their relationship. Stunningly beautiful, that they may fall because of fragile wings of vanity and wax. Less than 3 this story!

mrsatterthwaite January 13 2010, 06:51:20 UTC

haha I had to stop and think for a good five minutes before I understood 'less than 3' /fail

Icarus is one of those stories that can be interpreted in so many ways, and I am glad that I didn't butcher it too much. Thanks for reading, and glad you enjoyed :)

envoler January 13 2010, 03:38:00 UTC

ahhh i really, really love this. especially Wooyoung leaned forward against Chansung's restraining arms, pressing their combined weights against the thin railing between safety and a two-story free fall. ♥

mrsatterthwaite January 13 2010, 06:55:40 UTC

ahhh thanks so much!!! <3 <3 <3 (I think that's my favorite line, too :)