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danaid_luv August 16 2010, 01:49:44 UTC
*whispering* Tom's not going to make trouble for Chad & Kane, right? At first I was fairly worried, but upon further reading, he seems far less vicious, much more...curious. Interested, in general. But, y'know, I just don't want this making it in as an expose' in the school paper, etc. *wibbles*

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anyothergirl415 August 16 2010, 01:53:53 UTC
No I don't think he will. I see Tom as one of those people in your school, everyone sees him around but no one really notices him you know? He's not looking to cause trouble, just looking to belong.

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sweetest_e August 16 2010, 02:11:55 UTC
I really liked this chapter. I thought it to be very neat and creative idea. And I kind of love Tom's insights especially Misha and Mike's. And the part where he imagined he was the sixth member... sort of tug at some heartstrings. I'm also having a very weird mental image of an "emo" Tom... it's actually kind of hot. *shakes image away* Anyways Loved the chapter! This is an awesome story!

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anyothergirl415 August 16 2010, 17:11:13 UTC
haha emo Tom *grins* It's oddly appealing. I'm glad you're enjoying :D

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anyothergirl415 August 16 2010, 17:11:56 UTC
Oh good! I was going for different! Looks like more Tom might be a request!

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seelentraene August 16 2010, 02:18:57 UTC
Tom could be the one to accidentally discover Chad's secret (or at least be the reason why it is known at school 'thinking about bleeding Chad and losing conscious and Tom finding him, calling medical help and discovering old bruises so Chad HAS to tell what's going on'). Maybe even be the one where Chad will live at (let's say Tom lives alone since he's already 18 - by a few days - as his parents died, leaving him with enough money not to fall into the system).

Or - Misha's secret is discovered as his gran has to go to the hospital and Tom being in there (parents - see above) when M² with child show up.

Or - Jensen is actually the one to discover Misha's daughter - wanted to talk to M² regarding first time.

Or - send them all (J²,M²,C²) on a long weekend - make that a surprise for C² planned by the other couples.

*shutting up now*

Btw, love that verse.

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anyothergirl415 August 16 2010, 17:13:15 UTC
Oooo I really like your ideas hehe so many good ones!! I'm taking note of them all and we shall see if any work with the story direction!

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geri August 16 2010, 02:52:59 UTC
Very good perspective from tom's point of view is there anyway he could be incorporated into the gang at all?

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anyothergirl415 August 16 2010, 17:13:43 UTC
Quite possibly! We shall see!

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