My first fanfic "Wait, why not?"

[ivonnemcgruder]

Title: Wait, why not?
Pairing: Sushi, Koyato
Rating: NC-15
Summary: Boys are confused about own actions when a new special sound’s heard from the next room.
Author: IvonneMcGruder
Beta reader: R_Hr_maniac (She says: Sorry for mistakes I havn’t found)

Comments

[crimsonetoile]

Do you know what this fic has just done to me?! XDDD I was like "Oh my, I need some fiction" and I saw that XDDDD
“OKAY! But one day, I will beat you! I will eat a lot and grow taller and stronger!” Ahahaha that made me laugh so much. I could easily imagine Tego acting like that.
It's your first ff? So wow! I would never be brave enough to wirte smut fic as my first one XDDD
Haha it's funny what KoyaShige can do with other people ^_~ Poor Yamapi.I'm looking forward next fics, you know... we need more KoyaShige and Sushi love xD
and I think I need to get used to smuts with Sushi again... XD

[ivonnemcgruder]

Actually this is my first fanfiction in English and about JE boys. A wrote more fanfictions in past. THANKS so much for your comment, because I was really scared wether people will like it or not. Yes, I can imagine Tego acting like that as well, and Massu as well: "I'm hungry." XD I have two ff's prepared. TaNaka and Ohyass XD I hope you will like them as well. And yes, it is kinda strange - sex things between Massu and Tegoshi XD

[crimsonetoile]

Hahaha yes Massu's "I'm hungry" is great too! but sorry... just after something like that? XDDDD
Oh, TaNaka! YAY! *___* I can't wait when you share it with us!
Hahah it's beacause Tegomass is fluffy love. Mainly. At least, I think so XDD
Thanks ^_^ But now I can't stop adoring your icon xD

[ivonnemcgruder]

Btw. your icon is amazing ^_~

[ame_no_okami]

hahahaha that was soo cute, everyone is infected with the Koyatoness. ^^ And Massu doesn't want that to end with Tesshi. ^^ I really liked this.

[ivonnemcgruder]

Thaks for comment! I'm happy that you liked it XD. But everyone is talking about Koyatoness, It should be more about Shige's beautiful manly voice,but nevermind XD Thanks for reading it XD URESHIYO!

[datdai]

wah, that's nice... actually, I do not read ff's, but this one is totally cute, I hope for more *___*///
your describtion of them 'touching' each other was sooo awww~ *nose bleeding* XD

[ivonnemcgruder]

Saaa...it was the worse XD Actually write a describtion of something is really hard for me even in my nativ language XD As I said, I have TaNaka and Ohyass prepared. Thanks for making a exception and read this XD

[mknsen08]

OHMYGOD TWO IN ONE FIC. YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH I'M PRAISING YOU RIGHT NOW

ALSKFALKFHALKSFHLAKHFKLAFA;LSFJA;JFA;HFA;LF More when I get back from school and when I'm more coherent. ALFHKALKGHA;SDALGA;LD;SJ;FGAFJAFGKLALKS

who knew reading this fic before going to school and at 06:01am in the morning would make my day? XD ♥

[ivonnemcgruder]

THANKS!!!! So much XD I hope your day will be fine XD

[mknsen08]

It is actually. When I got to school my friend was using crutches because she sprained her ankle. Then I remembered, It wouldn’t be that bad, if he hadn’t fell directly on his crotch. And during lunch, I nearly said: "Hold your crotch down, damnit!" So yeah, today was GREAT.

And as I'm writing this comment down, CHIRARIZUMU stars playing. XDDD

[ivonnemcgruder]

XD Where are you from? XD Chirarizumu, I LOVE THIS SONG! I´m just listening Kiss by SuShi XD

[suketeru]

“Wait, why not?!!”

hahaha sushi = <3

[ivonnemcgruder]

♥