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Mass Effect Kink Meme: PART XXIV

Jun 10, 2015 21:27

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Repost: Kid fic anonymous June 10 2015, 14:36:04 UTC

http://masseffectkink.livejournal.com/8618.html?thread=42813354#t42813354

Because there's no such thing as enough kid fic.

Re: Repost: Kid fic anonymous June 11 2015, 03:38:19 UTC

Seconded!! <3

The Perfect Bait - 1 anonymous June 29 2015, 01:08:28 UTC

Partial Fill, completed earlier this month, but forgot to post it here. Bleh ( ... )

Re: The Perfect Bait - 2 anonymous June 29 2015, 01:10:13 UTC

“And make sure Joker doesn't fall out of bed. Strap him in if you have too ( ... )

Re: The Perfect Bait - 3 anonymous June 29 2015, 01:12:09 UTC

“What have you done!” demanded Shepard ( ... )

Re: The Perfect Bait - 4 anonymous June 29 2015, 01:13:19 UTC

Eni smiled through the pain. Her mouth stained blue, teeth smeared with blood. She was weakening, the bullet had carved a path, like a hot knife through butter. Eni realised that she had very little time left. She gripped the hand pressing on her stomach with the last of her strength ( ... )

Re: The Perfect Bait - 5 anonymous June 29 2015, 01:14:36 UTC

Shepard drew the trembling turian child tight to her chest. She shook her head when Dr. Chakwas tried to coax her to talk. There were no words. Shepard hugged Janix close as doctors, nurses, civilians, and security personnel flooded the hospital foyer. Her shoulders wilted as she wept ( ... )

Re: The Perfect Bait - 6/6 anonymous June 29 2015, 01:16:23 UTC

Dr. Chakwas saw how Shepard reacted to his flanging cry. The turian word for mother was repeated in a higher frantic pitch. Shepard embraced Janix as if her were her son, pressing him close to her chest, her arms secure around his fringe, back, and bottom. She glared at the asari nurse. Dr. Chakwas recognised that dangerous glint in Shepard's eyes ( ... )

Re: The Perfect Bait - 6/6 anonymous June 29 2015, 10:06:03 UTC

Tip for next time: Punctuation goes inside the speech marks :)

Re: The Perfect Bait - 6/6 anonymous June 29 2015, 10:36:49 UTC

Should that P have been capitalized?

Re: The Perfect Bait - 6/6 anonymous June 30 2015, 01:39:04 UTC

Not if you're not born in the US.

British English writers do use punctuation outside the speechmarks. What you've read is correct for the UK.

It's not for US writers.

They punctuate inside the speechmarks.

As for the capitalisation of the P, in a title, it's relevant.

Re: The Perfect Bait - 6/6 anonymous June 30 2015, 09:18:45 UTC

I'm not the OP but I'm British, and we do not use punctuation outside of speech marks (we prefer inverted commas).

If I'm wrong, I have yet to see any book or media involving direct speech that has used punctuation outside of the inverted commas.

Re: The Perfect Bait - 6/6 anonymous June 30 2015, 11:35:35 UTC

Actually they do use punctuation outside the speech-marks in the British colonies.

NZ for example.

They also use punctuation inside the speech-marks too.

Neither example is wrong.

Both are right, they're just different for different parts of the world.

Re: The Perfect Bait - 6/6 anonymous July 1 2015, 02:08:38 UTC

No, I'm a New Zealander and we were definitely taught inside, never outside unless it's only a fragment of a quote.

Re: The Perfect Bait - 6/6 anonymous July 26 2015, 08:36:23 UTC

Awesome; I loved the little guy! Are you going to expand on this with some Turian, Garrus, snark in a follow up? :D

I hope they, Bioware, have an exciting 'Garrus' like LI for ME4!

Re: The Perfect Bait - 6/6 anonymous July 27 2015, 06:41:59 UTC

Please put a link to the sequel when it comes out, I'm really invested in this story!

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