Yeah it was great. I just really like how Garrus was in a huff about nobody letting him suck their blood. It's just a snack guys, no need to make this weird! As for nourishment, I think you handled it well. Personally I always thought the Dextro DNA allergy was kinda soft science but whatever. Could say he can filter out that stuff with fluids and not worry about it, maybe because animals on Palaven would try to poison predators sucking on them?
Anyhow, sequel ideas. I would love to see Kaidan get fed upon, it kinda seems like he was manipulating the situation for his own enjoyment honestly, suggesting the idea, taunting her ego and then obviously getting off on it himself. Maybe have Ash stroke his ego until he lets Garrus bite him on the neck, being very careful and having a packet of medigel literally in hand in case anything happens? Vengeance is a dish best served at 98.6 F.
An alternate idea for the sequel, or for a third sequel if you like, would be for a threesome between all of them. In the original plans for the game Shepard could pull some kind of 'crazy stunt' to save them both, so maybe they want to celebrate living? Make Garrus bisexual and have a wonderful three way between them all that ends with a happy purring Garrus sandwiched between two sleeping humans after he's drained them each bit by bit with a couple bites each at a time until they both passed out, making him very full and satisfied.
Kaidan's turn is definitely in the cards. I love the idea of saving them both at Virmire (might not end up being Shepard, though) and celebrating with a threesome. I'd already started poking at an angsty Virmire reaction but I might have to do both :) I'm just wrestling with RL, sickness, and some of my own fic at the moment as well, so might be a while before I pop back with a sequel.
Thank you A!A, I'll wait as long as I have to, just so long as I can be satisfied this is on the way!
Looking forward to a lovely (possibly anemia-inducing) threesome. Just one little niggling request, could it please be a true threesome, with Kaidan and Garrus just as interested in each other, rather than just them double teaming Ashley?
That one request out of the way, I wish you good times and will be waiting patiently.
Anyhow, sequel ideas. I would love to see Kaidan get fed upon, it kinda seems like he was manipulating the situation for his own enjoyment honestly, suggesting the idea, taunting her ego and then obviously getting off on it himself. Maybe have Ash stroke his ego until he lets Garrus bite him on the neck, being very careful and having a packet of medigel literally in hand in case anything happens? Vengeance is a dish best served at 98.6 F.
An alternate idea for the sequel, or for a third sequel if you like, would be for a threesome between all of them. In the original plans for the game Shepard could pull some kind of 'crazy stunt' to save them both, so maybe they want to celebrate living? Make Garrus bisexual and have a wonderful three way between them all that ends with a happy purring Garrus sandwiched between two sleeping humans after he's drained them each bit by bit with a couple bites each at a time until they both passed out, making him very full and satisfied.
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Looking forward to a lovely (possibly anemia-inducing) threesome. Just one little niggling request, could it please be a true threesome, with Kaidan and Garrus just as interested in each other, rather than just them double teaming Ashley?
That one request out of the way, I wish you good times and will be waiting patiently.
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