my try at this
anonymous
April 11 2014, 19:41:47 UTC
First: I don't know how to write in italic/ bold so forgive me. Second: I'm French so my wirting'll be flawed and some name/acronyms may be wrong one (or litteral translation of the French ones). Thirdly: It's 9 pm and I must go to sleep in 20 min so it's short. Fourth: I tried to make it less ckraky as possible. Fifth: Sorry if it isn't exactly what was asked.
The Heroïc council
When Valern had been named Councilor, the galarian union had already understood the avantages of having somone at the Council so he was promoted to principal informant of the STG and, consequently, had to take time to learn how to defend himself even if he prefered to avoid fights and know things before their happenings (be it thanks to the Shadow broker or to the STG).
When the six hundreds-and-little years old Tevos was elected Councilor, she already was one of the good asari commandos. Not one of the best but she was still quite efficient. Needless to say, her position had put her in danger often so she wasn't going to forget her training anytime soon.
As every turians, Sparatus had to be part of the army for at least two years before being a citizen of the turian hierarchy. As every turians (except some rebellous ones (a particular SS-C officer came to his mind),) he wasn't one to give up the discpiline and sso he kept in good shape.
So the Cerberus coup wasn't rally a surprise for them thanks to Vaerln's informants. And less so a threat.
They were being leaded by Udina to a car and they followed only to learn where his boss, The Illusive Man, was hiding. Ashley Williams was with them . "to protect them". While they apprciated the tough, the Councilors didn't want her to being dragged in all this shit. But for that, they should have revealed they didn't need protection. Wich they didn't want to do.
And now, on top of all the shit that hit the Citadel, Shepard was here, threatening Udina.
Wonderful.
And now, the two humans Spectres were in a mexican standoff (Spartacus had taken a liking ofr this human expression, among others). And Udina didn't seem willing to lead them to his boss anymore. With a sigh of deception, Tevos stepped on the left, took Udina's right arm and twisted it behind his back. She then lowered herself while the human was groaning in pain and shoot him in the head.
The two Spectre, astonished, turned to face them, stupor clearly visible of their face. Without a second of breathing, tevos then Pull the fantom who crept behind the hero of the Citadel and Pushed the cerberus' woman in the ground ten floors below.
"Anything else to say Commander ?" asked Spartacus, rjoicing in Shepard's look. Williams got a hold on herslef the first. "Wow, good, but there's still the matter of the Reapers." "Actually... no." answered the turian, "valern here managed to connect all of them to the Couduct." "So we could teleport them all into the Citadel ? I fail to see the point." "The point, human, is that the relay often get a little.... confused and ship get teleported a little far that they would have wanted." "And ?" "And Valern also happend to succed in selecting were the shoft is and so we can choose were the Reapers will reappear." "Wich is ?" "Let me show you." The turian pianoted a moment on his Omni-tool beofre saying: "Right in the galactic center." "So they're all dead ?" "It will take a few minutes but yes." precised the salarian. "And what about the husk, brute and all their monsters ?" "Oh, them. I managed to creat a little something that, when activated, will make them explode. it's a sort of eMP but calibrated only to work on Reapers forces." answered Spartacus. He ten pressed a flashing button on his Omni-tool: "Your existence is dismissed." shouted him.
After two or three minutes, Ashley asked: "so, remeber me why do you need Spectre ?"
Re: my try at this
anonymous
April 19 2014, 09:48:20 UTC
LOL
The fact that none of the Councilors took out Udinia, especially Tevos with her biotics, annoyed the hell out of me. But then ME3 was more of a human and Shepard Mary-Sue fest than even the first two installments. It was downright annoying in ME3 how blatant it became that only Shepard was allowed to do anything useful.
Second: I'm French so my wirting'll be flawed and some name/acronyms may be wrong one (or litteral translation of the French ones).
Thirdly: It's 9 pm and I must go to sleep in 20 min so it's short.
Fourth: I tried to make it less ckraky as possible.
Fifth: Sorry if it isn't exactly what was asked.
The Heroïc council
When Valern had been named Councilor, the galarian union had already understood the avantages of having somone at the Council so he was promoted to principal informant of the STG and, consequently, had to take time to learn how to defend himself even if he prefered to avoid fights and know things before their happenings (be it thanks to the Shadow broker or to the STG).
When the six hundreds-and-little years old Tevos was elected Councilor, she already was one of the good asari commandos. Not one of the best but she was still quite efficient.
Needless to say, her position had put her in danger often so she wasn't going to forget her training anytime soon.
As every turians, Sparatus had to be part of the army for at least two years before being a citizen of the turian hierarchy. As every turians (except some rebellous ones (a particular SS-C officer came to his mind),) he wasn't one to give up the discpiline and sso he kept in good shape.
So the Cerberus coup wasn't rally a surprise for them thanks to Vaerln's informants.
And less so a threat.
They were being leaded by Udina to a car and they followed only to learn where his boss, The Illusive Man, was hiding.
Ashley Williams was with them . "to protect them". While they apprciated the tough, the Councilors didn't want her to being dragged in all this shit.
But for that, they should have revealed they didn't need protection.
Wich they didn't want to do.
And now, on top of all the shit that hit the Citadel, Shepard was here, threatening Udina.
Wonderful.
And now, the two humans Spectres were in a mexican standoff (Spartacus had taken a liking ofr this human expression, among others).
And Udina didn't seem willing to lead them to his boss anymore.
With a sigh of deception, Tevos stepped on the left, took Udina's right arm and twisted it behind his back. She then lowered herself while the human was groaning in pain and shoot him in the head.
The two Spectre, astonished, turned to face them, stupor clearly visible of their face.
Without a second of breathing, tevos then Pull the fantom who crept behind the hero of the Citadel and Pushed the cerberus' woman in the ground ten floors below.
"Anything else to say Commander ?" asked Spartacus, rjoicing in Shepard's look. Williams got a hold on herslef the first.
"Wow, good, but there's still the matter of the Reapers."
"Actually... no." answered the turian, "valern here managed to connect all of them to the Couduct."
"So we could teleport them all into the Citadel ? I fail to see the point."
"The point, human, is that the relay often get a little.... confused and ship get teleported a little far that they would have wanted."
"And ?"
"And Valern also happend to succed in selecting were the shoft is and so we can choose were the Reapers will reappear."
"Wich is ?"
"Let me show you."
The turian pianoted a moment on his Omni-tool beofre saying:
"Right in the galactic center."
"So they're all dead ?"
"It will take a few minutes but yes." precised the salarian.
"And what about the husk, brute and all their monsters ?"
"Oh, them. I managed to creat a little something that, when activated, will make them explode. it's a sort of eMP but calibrated only to work on Reapers forces." answered Spartacus.
He ten pressed a flashing button on his Omni-tool:
"Your existence is dismissed." shouted him.
After two or three minutes, Ashley asked:
"so, remeber me why do you need Spectre ?"
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Someone slap me for my stupidity
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The fact that none of the Councilors took out Udinia, especially Tevos with her biotics, annoyed the hell out of me. But then ME3 was more of a human and Shepard Mary-Sue fest than even the first two installments. It was downright annoying in ME3 how blatant it became that only Shepard was allowed to do anything useful.
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