Belayed victory 2.0 (FemShep/clone!Shep) 8/?
anonymous
May 8 2014, 21:43:16 UTC
“You can’t be serious!” Shepard said in panic, struggling with her bonds as she tried to edge herself further away from the knife. “So you have been playing me all along?”
“That’s right, bitch” the clone hissed and spat at Shepard’s face.
“Oh, how I wanted to drive a knife right through your heart every time I saw you…” the clone said dreamily, lifting the knife away from Shepard and taking a step back.
“Then why didn’t you?” Shepard said hurtfully, feeling betrayed by this woman.
“And be killed by your crew afterwards?” the clone laughed. “I wanted you to die, but I also wanted to live afterwards, thank you”
“I have spent all that time earning your trust, biding my time until I could get you completely alone” the clone said. “And now I finally did… and you are done for, Shepard” she smirked at the gaping commander.
“Your perversion made it all so much easier… the original plan was to knock you out and get you where you are now”
“But you are such a huge slut that you actually let me do this to you willingly…” the clone chuckled.
“I am ashamed that we share same DNA, you filthy whore”
“Then why didn’t you kill me back in the offices?” Shepard finally asked.
“And risk that you would fight back like last time?” the clone smirked.
“No. If was going to kill you, I needed to get you in a position where you could no longer fight back” the clone explained. “Besides, it gave you an idea that you could actually trust me with your life, didn’t it, commander?” the clone winked.
Shepard felt terribly ashamed at being so thoroughly bested by this woman. She began to plead.
“Please. Just let me go. You can go where you want… I will not try to hunt you down”
The clone laughed at that. “I wish Maya could see you right now… ‘The great commander Shepard begging for her life’ ”
“Unfortunately for you, I have made my decision. You will stay in this vault, as you should have all that time ago” the clone said with finality, making Shepard gasp a panicked “No!”
“Yes! No friends, no drones to save you this time commander… your libido and stupidity managed to do what a small army and Maya’s little schemes could not.”
“Also, I am done listening to your pathetic whining…” the clone picked up an object from her pocket and moved it to Shepard’s face.
Shepard screamed in horror when the clone forced a red ball gag into her mouth and tied the straps behind her head. She could produce only muffled sounds now.
The clone watched Shepard spit through the ball gag and wrestle with her bonds before she slowly, almost reluctantly, pulled a second object from her pocket - a dark rubber sphere in size little smaller than a tennis ball. She pressed few small buttons on it and watched it flash red three times. She then pressed it into the palm of Shepard’s left hand who immediately gripped it tightly, as if her life depended on it.
The clone smiled at Shepard slightly before she pulled her knife again. She snarled at the commander who winced as she felt her cutting the straps of her bra and tearing it from her body. She felt the same thing being done to her panties after.
The clone then placed the knife against her throat again. “I can’t just walk away from here and let you rot…” she began to say and Shepard looked up.
“Don’t get your hopes up” her twin said, seeing Shepard’s hopeful expression. “I fully intend to let you rot in here in the end… but first,” she said as she threw the knife away to the floor.
“… I still promised you that one orgasm… and since it would be the very last orgasm in your miserable life,” the clone said and touched Shepard’s pussy.
“And seeing how willingly you let me put you in these restraints… I have decided to fulfill that promise.”
Re: Belayed victory 2.0 (FemShep/clone!Shep) 8/?
anonymous
May 8 2014, 21:51:49 UTC
A!A. Seems that Shepard has really done it this time... :)
I am too tired to edit and post the rest, but I will try to do so tomorrow, or at the very least on weekend.
Also, thank you for all the comments and please keep them coming! Like many emotionally deprived individuals, I too yearn for an approval from anonymous strangers on the internet :D Also, it keeps me writing... :)
Re: Belayed victory 2.0 (FemShep/clone!Shep) 8/?
anonymous
May 9 2014, 02:23:22 UTC
A nickle worth of free advice, Shepard: Don't play trust games with fucking psychopaths. I really hope she has something planned or else she's too dumb to live.
Re: Re: Belayed victory 2.0 (FemShep/clone!Shep) 8/?
anonymous
May 9 2014, 04:48:55 UTC
Well she handled Morinth just fine. I guess all those Charm-induced heel face turns let her get cocky. Plus Clone!Shep looks more like a sociopath - and you never know that sociopaths are sociopaths until you're on the receiving end.
Re: Belayed victory 2.0 (FemShep/clone!Shep) 8/?
anonymous
May 9 2014, 07:45:51 UTC
A!A.
Thank you for all the comments! :)
Yeah, what Shepard did here is principally similar to when she went and willingly melded with Morinth (so we know that she can be canonically too dumb to live when she wants too :D ).
Re: Belayed victory 2.0 (FemShep/clone!Shep) 8/?
anonymous
May 9 2014, 12:58:12 UTC
Yes, but in the case of Morinth, she had back-up who was supposed to show up before the meld.
Also, detecting sociopaths may be hard in theory, but if they've given you a clue like, oh, I don't know, trying to kill you and steal your life, you gotta take the hint.
Re: Belayed victory 2.0 (FemShep/clone!Shep) 8/?
anonymous
May 9 2014, 13:22:12 UTC
A!A. I am referring to their meld aboard the Normandy after you recruited her.
I think I may have made a mistake by letting it hang at this point since it is starting to give people wrong ideas. If you carefully read the second half of the very last scene, there is one detail that should give you clear hint of what is happening :) (don't spoil it for others though)
Also sorry for the delay. But just today I learned that "people like me" are causing other A!As to leave this site and frankly I feel utterly depressed to do anything kink related today :( Sorry :(
Re: Belayed victory 2.0 (FemShep/clone!Shep) 8/?
anonymous
May 9 2014, 13:27:37 UTC
> But just today I learned that "people like me" are causing other A!As to leave this site
That's not true. Someone is butthurt over the fact that slave!kink-ers have a nice network-effect thing going while the rest of the kmeme is drying up. Instead of writing fills and boosting their own network-effect or waiting until anticipation from ME4 drives people back here, they're bitching about it.
The best thing you can do to piss them off is write more slave!kink fills!
Re: Belayed victory 2.0 (FemShep/clone!Shep) 8/?
anonymous
May 9 2014, 16:38:11 UTC
Oh, yeah. That makes sense, although, to be fair, any Shep who does that is also too dumb to live. (Literally, since they die) I love that bioware included that.
“That’s right, bitch” the clone hissed and spat at Shepard’s face.
“Oh, how I wanted to drive a knife right through your heart every time I saw you…” the clone said dreamily, lifting the knife away from Shepard and taking a step back.
“Then why didn’t you?” Shepard said hurtfully, feeling betrayed by this woman.
“And be killed by your crew afterwards?” the clone laughed. “I wanted you to die, but I also wanted to live afterwards, thank you”
“I have spent all that time earning your trust, biding my time until I could get you completely alone” the clone said. “And now I finally did… and you are done for, Shepard” she smirked at the gaping commander.
“Your perversion made it all so much easier… the original plan was to knock you out and get you where you are now”
“But you are such a huge slut that you actually let me do this to you willingly…” the clone chuckled.
“I am ashamed that we share same DNA, you filthy whore”
“Then why didn’t you kill me back in the offices?” Shepard finally asked.
“And risk that you would fight back like last time?” the clone smirked.
“No. If was going to kill you, I needed to get you in a position where you could no longer fight back” the clone explained. “Besides, it gave you an idea that you could actually trust me with your life, didn’t it, commander?” the clone winked.
Shepard felt terribly ashamed at being so thoroughly bested by this woman. She began to plead.
“Please. Just let me go. You can go where you want… I will not try to hunt you down”
The clone laughed at that. “I wish Maya could see you right now… ‘The great commander Shepard begging for her life’ ”
“Unfortunately for you, I have made my decision. You will stay in this vault, as you should have all that time ago” the clone said with finality, making Shepard gasp a panicked “No!”
“Yes! No friends, no drones to save you this time commander… your libido and stupidity managed to do what a small army and Maya’s little schemes could not.”
“Also, I am done listening to your pathetic whining…” the clone picked up an object from her pocket and moved it to Shepard’s face.
Shepard screamed in horror when the clone forced a red ball gag into her mouth and tied the straps behind her head. She could produce only muffled sounds now.
The clone watched Shepard spit through the ball gag and wrestle with her bonds before she slowly, almost reluctantly, pulled a second object from her pocket - a dark rubber sphere in size little smaller than a tennis ball. She pressed few small buttons on it and watched it flash red three times. She then pressed it into the palm of Shepard’s left hand who immediately gripped it tightly, as if her life depended on it.
The clone smiled at Shepard slightly before she pulled her knife again. She snarled at the commander who winced as she felt her cutting the straps of her bra and tearing it from her body. She felt the same thing being done to her panties after.
The clone then placed the knife against her throat again. “I can’t just walk away from here and let you rot…” she began to say and Shepard looked up.
“Don’t get your hopes up” her twin said, seeing Shepard’s hopeful expression. “I fully intend to let you rot in here in the end… but first,” she said as she threw the knife away to the floor.
“… I still promised you that one orgasm… and since it would be the very last orgasm in your miserable life,” the clone said and touched Shepard’s pussy.
“And seeing how willingly you let me put you in these restraints… I have decided to fulfill that promise.”
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I am too tired to edit and post the rest, but I will try to do so tomorrow, or at the very least on weekend.
Also, thank you for all the comments and please keep them coming!
Like many emotionally deprived individuals, I too yearn for an approval from anonymous strangers on the internet :D Also, it keeps me writing... :)
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Here's hoping the clone is just a masterful tease. Pretty wild stuff either way! :D
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Context: I'm a fan of snuff stories.
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Thank you for all the comments! :)
Yeah, what Shepard did here is principally similar to when she went and willingly melded with Morinth (so we know that she can be canonically too dumb to live when she wants too :D ).
We'll just have to wait and see what happens...
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Also, detecting sociopaths may be hard in theory, but if they've given you a clue like, oh, I don't know, trying to kill you and steal your life, you gotta take the hint.
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I think I may have made a mistake by letting it hang at this point since it is starting to give people wrong ideas.
If you carefully read the second half of the very last scene, there is one detail that should give you clear hint of what is happening :) (don't spoil it for others though)
Also sorry for the delay. But just today I learned that "people like me" are causing other A!As to leave this site and frankly I feel utterly depressed to do anything kink related today :( Sorry :(
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That's not true. Someone is butthurt over the fact that slave!kink-ers have a nice network-effect thing going while the rest of the kmeme is drying up. Instead of writing fills and boosting their own network-effect or waiting until anticipation from ME4 drives people back here, they're bitching about it.
The best thing you can do to piss them off is write more slave!kink fills!
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Me too! :) And yeah, it's more of a easter-egg since it just makes you reload anyway.
Nevertheless "http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TooDumbToLive" followed by "http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/OutWithABang" has been a huge kink of mine ever since I was little and started to get "funny feelings down there" :D
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