Re: [Fill] The Loving Kind 11/11
anonymous
March 2 2011, 21:42:01 UTC
"No," Kaidan said slowly, sitting down on the vacated settee. "I want to apologise."
Shepard's brows quirked together. "For . . . Horizon? You apologised when you came on board, I know why-"
"No," he shook his head. "For . . . for some of the things I've been thinking lately."
Now Shepard sobered, tilting her head to the side as she scrutinised him. "What do you mean?"
"I . . . I've been jealous of Tali for God's sakes. I saw you put your arm around her tonight and I almost wanted to punch her!"
Shepard's eyebrows shot up towards her hairline and she suppressed a snort of laughter. "What?" Her arms fell back to her sides and she raised a hand to hide her smile.
"And it's not just Tali," Kaidan persisted, leaning forward and resting his arms on his knees. "I think Thane and I had a pissing contest back on Agebinium. I threatened Jacob with my biotics."
"Jacob?" Shepard repeated, eyes boggling. She circled the coffee table to sit beside him. "Why Jacob? He's all cow eyed over Miranda."
"Well I'm not sure if Miranda wants to fuck you or just be you." Kaidan couldn't help but grin as Shepard shifted in her seat. He leaned closer. "But Jack swears blind you were sniffing around her bunk, her words, not mine."
Shepard pursed her lips and looked down, so she didn't see his arm snaking towards her until it was too late and he was pulling her onto his lap. She laughed, steadying herself on his shoulders. "Kaidan!"
"I mean it. I've been so jealous lately I couldn't focus. Even Kasumi seemed like a threat and I've seen Jacob leaving her quarters looking violated."
Shepard leaned closer. "What do you think she does to him? I think Samara knows but isn't saying . . . "
"Listen to me," Kaidan said softly, guiding her away from the titbit of gossip. "I'm sorry for being so jealous." He let his hands drop to her hips and she bit her bottom lip. He couldn't resist a gentle brush of his tongue over the captured skin.
"I don't encourage it," she whispered against his mouth. He could just see her cheeks colouring.
"No, don't apologise." He kissed her jaw. Her hands fell to his hips and she rocked forwards experimentally. "You love them. They love you back."
"I love you."
His next words were swallowed by her kiss, the half formed argument fell away beside his shirt. "And I"
Her overalls, over the bed.
"Love you"
The pillows bounced off to land on the deck, the mattress foam absorbing their impact.
"But I don't"
The shoes last, thrown in a hurried arc over to the ghost town fish tank.
"Deserve you."
A full kiss, every inch of skin that could be pressed against skin, hot and smooth, curved and hard, slick and ready.
"Kaidan," Shepard gasped as they parted. "You think too damned much."
"I love you," he managed, before she enveloped him.
Re: [Fill] The Loving Kind 11/11
anonymous
March 17 2012, 19:27:01 UTC
Tension. My. Ass. Kaidan knew exactly why the turian kept inviting Shepard down to the ropes, and it wasn't to practice his damned reach.
Having done the Shep/Garrus romance too this killed me. I don’t often really laugh out loud at fics but this was just perfect.
"Bullshit. I don't want to break my knuckles on your skinny little shoulders," Zaeed retorted.
I never got Zaeed in my party, and this is the first time I’ve really cared. Love the way you write him!
or playfully flicked a grape at Garrus' carapace
Oh god, the mental images.
or blushed when Thane walked into a room.
Who could even blame her, Kaidan or not?
Yep. We're just two ex-Alliance officers, hanging out, jerking off to the same woman. Nothing wrong or creepy about that.
Joker, Kaidan decided, was going to have to die.
This is one of my favorite passages ever. EVER. I feel this needs to be my status somewhere.
Kaidan was overwhelmed with a high school urge to compare lengths.
Really, Kaidan, really? God, you’re ridiculous. And I love you.
"Yep. Well you probably know how it is with Miranda. Doesn't matter how it ended, you still feel . . . protective, you know?"
Oh god, all but threaten him. WHAT ARE YOU DOING? And why is it so attractive?
'Forgot you were an L2'
Oh shut up, you sanctimonious little clone.
I know a lot of people who would have liked the option to say that to Miranda. It’s funny imagining it out of Kaidan’s mouth, even if he never actually said it.
Ahaha, look up the word Siha. Amazing.
Thane nodded. "Your body would seek greater knowledge, even though your rules tell you otherwise. I understand."
Eee, more of Kaidan and Thane interacting! I just adore them both, and like I said before, the way you write them together is incredibly interesting.
Oh damn, Thane calling Kaidan his competition? Glorious. Kaidan’s response was delicious too.
"Joker, I don't think I've understood even half of this conversation."
Nor would you want to Kaidan. Nor would you want to.
Shep and Kaidan’s last conversation was SO DAMN CUTE. And sweet and urg. I love how easily they fit together; you do a lovely job with them. Garrus is right, they do seem meant to be, especially the way you write them. I love jealousy fics and this is one of the better one’s I’ve seen in a while, so thanks!
"No," Kaidan said slowly, sitting down on the vacated settee. "I want to apologise."
Shepard's brows quirked together. "For . . . Horizon? You apologised when you came on board, I know why-"
"No," he shook his head. "For . . . for some of the things I've been thinking lately."
Now Shepard sobered, tilting her head to the side as she scrutinised him. "What do you mean?"
"I . . . I've been jealous of Tali for God's sakes. I saw you put your arm around her tonight and I almost wanted to punch her!"
Shepard's eyebrows shot up towards her hairline and she suppressed a snort of laughter. "What?" Her arms fell back to her sides and she raised a hand to hide her smile.
"And it's not just Tali," Kaidan persisted, leaning forward and resting his arms on his knees. "I think Thane and I had a pissing contest back on Agebinium. I threatened Jacob with my biotics."
"Jacob?" Shepard repeated, eyes boggling. She circled the coffee table to sit beside him. "Why Jacob? He's all cow eyed over Miranda."
"Well I'm not sure if Miranda wants to fuck you or just be you." Kaidan couldn't help but grin as Shepard shifted in her seat. He leaned closer. "But Jack swears blind you were sniffing around her bunk, her words, not mine."
Shepard pursed her lips and looked down, so she didn't see his arm snaking towards her until it was too late and he was pulling her onto his lap. She laughed, steadying herself on his shoulders. "Kaidan!"
"I mean it. I've been so jealous lately I couldn't focus. Even Kasumi seemed like a threat and I've seen Jacob leaving her quarters looking violated."
Shepard leaned closer. "What do you think she does to him? I think Samara knows but isn't saying . . . "
"Listen to me," Kaidan said softly, guiding her away from the titbit of gossip. "I'm sorry for being so jealous." He let his hands drop to her hips and she bit her bottom lip. He couldn't resist a gentle brush of his tongue over the captured skin.
"I don't encourage it," she whispered against his mouth. He could just see her cheeks colouring.
"No, don't apologise." He kissed her jaw. Her hands fell to his hips and she rocked forwards experimentally. "You love them. They love you back."
"I love you."
His next words were swallowed by her kiss, the half formed argument fell away beside his shirt. "And I"
Her overalls, over the bed.
"Love you"
The pillows bounced off to land on the deck, the mattress foam absorbing their impact.
"But I don't"
The shoes last, thrown in a hurried arc over to the ghost town fish tank.
"Deserve you."
A full kiss, every inch of skin that could be pressed against skin, hot and smooth, curved and hard, slick and ready.
"Kaidan," Shepard gasped as they parted. "You think too damned much."
"I love you," he managed, before she enveloped him.
They'd be jealous tomorrow morning.
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THIS IS WONDERFUL! They finally made up! He realized that - while hilarious - jealousy wasn't helping him! Garrus's theory on spirits~ <3
Well done, authoranon. Well done.
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I freaking loved it! This is the Shepard Kaidan fic that I have been looking for! I salute you author!anon fro this made me giggle like a schoolgirl.
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Having done the Shep/Garrus romance too this killed me. I don’t often really laugh out loud at fics but this was just perfect.
"Bullshit. I don't want to break my knuckles on your skinny little shoulders," Zaeed retorted.
I never got Zaeed in my party, and this is the first time I’ve really cared. Love the way you write him!
or playfully flicked a grape at Garrus' carapace
Oh god, the mental images.
or blushed when Thane walked into a room.
Who could even blame her, Kaidan or not?
Yep. We're just two ex-Alliance officers, hanging out, jerking off to the same woman. Nothing wrong or creepy about that.
Joker, Kaidan decided, was going to have to die.
This is one of my favorite passages ever. EVER. I feel this needs to be my status somewhere.
Kaidan was overwhelmed with a high school urge to compare lengths.
Really, Kaidan, really? God, you’re ridiculous. And I love you.
"Yep. Well you probably know how it is with Miranda. Doesn't matter how it ended, you still feel . . . protective, you know?"
Oh god, all but threaten him. WHAT ARE YOU DOING? And why is it so attractive?
'Forgot you were an L2'
Oh shut up, you sanctimonious little clone.
I know a lot of people who would have liked the option to say that to Miranda. It’s funny imagining it out of Kaidan’s mouth, even if he never actually said it.
Ahaha, look up the word Siha. Amazing.
Thane nodded. "Your body would seek greater knowledge, even though your rules tell you otherwise. I understand."
Eee, more of Kaidan and Thane interacting! I just adore them both, and like I said before, the way you write them together is incredibly interesting.
Oh damn, Thane calling Kaidan his competition? Glorious. Kaidan’s response was delicious too.
"Joker, I don't think I've understood even half of this conversation."
Nor would you want to Kaidan. Nor would you want to.
Shep and Kaidan’s last conversation was SO DAMN CUTE. And sweet and urg. I love how easily they fit together; you do a lovely job with them. Garrus is right, they do seem meant to be, especially the way you write them. I love jealousy fics and this is one of the better one’s I’ve seen in a while, so thanks!
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