Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2e/?
anonymous
October 8 2012, 05:13:51 UTC
Tali came hard, spilling herself inside her suit. She could feel her warmth slide down her leggings, down to her feet. The suit would absorb it eventually, a feature that the early nomadic quarians came up with shortly after it became apparent that they would not be getting Rannoch back as soon as they thought.
The quarian engineer sighed as John slowly released her, Tali not wanting the warmth that was John's muscled body to leave so soon. Her legs felt weak, barely able to stay upright.
John simply stood there, a look in his eye that sent shivers down Tali's spine. He never looked at her that way before! He had never looked at anyone that way before! What Tali saw in John's eyes was pure, unbridled lust. And perhaps a smug sense of cheekiness.
A moment passed and neither said a word.
Another moment passed and it finally dawned on Tali what had just occurred.
"Yo-you..." Tali's voice was shaky, as was her legs. John simply gave a look beneath hooded eyes, a look that made something ignite within her.
The quarian felt a flood of emotions filling her mind, many thoughts forming as a result. The most prominent of which being: How dare he!?
"BOSH'TET!"
Tali balled her little hand into an equally little fist, launching into the primate's chest. The hairless monkey simply smiled, an arrogant smirk that fueled a rage within Tali.
"BOSH'TET! BOSH'TET! BOSH'TET!"
The engineer punctuated each exclamation with another punch, slamming her fist against the ape's arms and chest. Tali didn't know why she bothered. It wasn't like they would do anything. If a man the size of John could take a bullet close range, what would a fist do, let alone a fist from a petite quarian engineer not known for her physical strength.
The smug bastard said nothing, smirking at her in that enraging, arrogant way as he turned and left engineering. Tali had half a mind to chuck an engine part at the back of his stupid, square head, but she didn't. Her limbs, her muscles, her entire body was spent. The hairless ape clearly knew the female form.
"That-that!" Tali still could not believe recent events, "That... bosh'tet! The... the audacity!"
The quarian, however enraged at John, was ultimately angered with herself, for many reasons.
For allowing him to so easily dominate her.
For not fighting back.
And for enjoying it.
Tali didn't understand. That was nothing like something John would do! The John Shepard she knew was selfess, compassionate, and understanding. A fierce protector of the helpless. A good man.
The John Shepard that had just fucked her against her workstation... he was... not those things. Though, maybe she could still count selfless, seeing as his apparent priority was making her come and not himself.
John had changed, that was for certain.
And Tali honestly did not know whether she disliked it or not.
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2e/?
anonymous
October 9 2012, 02:23:24 UTC
Goddess, yes please. This is perfection. I romanced Tali, Miranda, and Jack in ME2 and ended up picking Tali, but had all three of them at the romance point. Only way to make this hotter would be to add Miranda. Love it. Keep up the amazing work.
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2e/?
anonymous
October 9 2012, 02:48:01 UTC
Man, oh man. Good to see this story start to update again. Still great stuff, and I'm dying to see what happens when Jack gets her corrupting little mitts on Tali.
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2e/?
anonymous
October 18 2012, 16:28:17 UTC
Original "seconded" reader here; a!a, you've transcended mortality with your awesome. This is quite possibly the most glorious thing I've ever read, and I can't wait for more. And more. And more.
"Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - Author!Anon Here!
anonymous
November 6 2012, 02:25:49 UTC
I'd just like to take a moment here and apologize to the OP of this great prompt and any others who happened to be waiting patiently for an update.
No, this is not me saying I'm abandoning this prompt, so cool your jets. This is the opposite. This is me apologizing for making you guys wait for so long. I have been VERY busy lately and my personal life has not let me get a lot of writing done...
Well, that's a lie. I have been getting writing done, but those were personal projects on ff.net and other places. So yeah, I'm a selfish prick. Sorry 'bout that.
I will complete this fill, just give me some time, and I promise I'll blow your mind. After all, you don't want around six or seven chapters of the same ol' vanilla sex, do you? You want six or seven more chapters of awesome smut!
So, I humbly ask for your forgiveness OP, for being something of a selfish prick and ignoring a promise I made. There's nothing more I detest than someone who just drops a prompt altogether and I'll make sure it won't happen to you, good sir!
*phew*
Just one more small thing: I'll probably write out the whole thing first, then post it in its entirety on the new pages. I don't want to have you going all the way back to part 12!
The quarian engineer sighed as John slowly released her, Tali not wanting the warmth that was John's muscled body to leave so soon. Her legs felt weak, barely able to stay upright.
John simply stood there, a look in his eye that sent shivers down Tali's spine. He never looked at her that way before! He had never looked at anyone that way before! What Tali saw in John's eyes was pure, unbridled lust. And perhaps a smug sense of cheekiness.
A moment passed and neither said a word.
Another moment passed and it finally dawned on Tali what had just occurred.
"Yo-you..." Tali's voice was shaky, as was her legs. John simply gave a look beneath hooded eyes, a look that made something ignite within her.
The quarian felt a flood of emotions filling her mind, many thoughts forming as a result. The most prominent of which being: How dare he!?
"BOSH'TET!"
Tali balled her little hand into an equally little fist, launching into the primate's chest. The hairless monkey simply smiled, an arrogant smirk that fueled a rage within Tali.
"BOSH'TET! BOSH'TET! BOSH'TET!"
The engineer punctuated each exclamation with another punch, slamming her fist against the ape's arms and chest. Tali didn't know why she bothered. It wasn't like they would do anything. If a man the size of John could take a bullet close range, what would a fist do, let alone a fist from a petite quarian engineer not known for her physical strength.
The smug bastard said nothing, smirking at her in that enraging, arrogant way as he turned and left engineering. Tali had half a mind to chuck an engine part at the back of his stupid, square head, but she didn't. Her limbs, her muscles, her entire body was spent. The hairless ape clearly knew the female form.
"That-that!" Tali still could not believe recent events, "That... bosh'tet! The... the audacity!"
The quarian, however enraged at John, was ultimately angered with herself, for many reasons.
For allowing him to so easily dominate her.
For not fighting back.
And for enjoying it.
Tali didn't understand. That was nothing like something John would do! The John Shepard she knew was selfess, compassionate, and understanding. A fierce protector of the helpless. A good man.
The John Shepard that had just fucked her against her workstation... he was... not those things. Though, maybe she could still count selfless, seeing as his apparent priority was making her come and not himself.
John had changed, that was for certain.
And Tali honestly did not know whether she disliked it or not.
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Im blown away at how great this story is. I well and truly cant wait to see more.
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No, this is not me saying I'm abandoning this prompt, so cool your jets. This is the opposite. This is me apologizing for making you guys wait for so long. I have been VERY busy lately and my personal life has not let me get a lot of writing done...
Well, that's a lie. I have been getting writing done, but those were personal projects on ff.net and other places. So yeah, I'm a selfish prick. Sorry 'bout that.
I will complete this fill, just give me some time, and I promise I'll blow your mind. After all, you don't want around six or seven chapters of the same ol' vanilla sex, do you? You want six or seven more chapters of awesome smut!
So, I humbly ask for your forgiveness OP, for being something of a selfish prick and ignoring a promise I made. There's nothing more I detest than someone who just drops a prompt altogether and I'll make sure it won't happen to you, good sir!
*phew*
Just one more small thing: I'll probably write out the whole thing first, then post it in its entirety on the new pages. I don't want to have you going all the way back to part 12!
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I was getting curious i admit.
Im willing to wait, and cant wait to see more, but, well...the last time i was told something like this, it didnt end well.
Regardless, i will put my trust in you, author. I look forward to seeing the finished product.
(I hope i dont offend you in any way. You were honest with me, something i truly appreciate, and i figured its only fair that im honest with you.)
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