Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2c/?
anonymous
October 8 2012, 05:10:37 UTC
"I know how much you care for me. The feeling is very, very mutual, I assure you..."
Tali was practically pressed up against Shepard now, her hands entwined with his.
"...But we can't have any distractions right now. The mission is too important for you to be worrying about me all the time."
John's spirits were crushed. Every time they got too close, either John or Tali would do or say something that made them back-pedal out. Maybe they were afraid of the consequences of such a coupling or maybe it was some other reason.
See? You're not together! She even said it herself! Stop feeling guilty!
John frowned once more as he met Tali's eyes with his own. He nodded slowly.
"Yeah... I understand..." John sounded dejected, a defeated tone filling his voice. Tali didn't look much better, her shoulders drooping and her head hung low as she tried to avoid eye contact with the human in front of her.
It doesn't matter if it's not official! You know how she feels about you! She said it herself just moments ago!
Which she immediately back-pedaled on! You can't be expected to wait forever!
Tali is worth it.
So are you!
Tali deserves someone who will wait for her.
And you deserve someone who will actually be with you!
I deserve...
Look back on all the shit you've been through! Elysium, Eden Prime, Noveria, Feros, Virmire, The fucking Citadel, Horizon! The entire goddamn galaxy owes you their lives! What you deserve, what I deserve, is to have some fucking fun!
John faltered. He didn't know how much influence Jack was able to put onto his mind, but he found himself somewhat agreeing with her.
You're a lion, Shepard. Bare those teeth...
What happened next was not something that John could easily explain or rationalize, even several years later. Tali did not know that her captain could move that quickly, and honestly, neither did John. Before either of them could form a coherent thought, John had Tali pinned against her console, one of his legs forcing her own apart as he pressed himself flush against her.
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2d/?
anonymous
October 8 2012, 05:12:04 UTC
John activated his omni-tool, bringing it up to level, silently thanking EDI for her lessons on hacking. With a few quick button presses, the human marine found what he was looking for. On the holo screen before him, John could see a list of all of Tali's suit applications, one of which caught his eye. He knew he shouldn't be surprised. The Shadow Broker's terminals had already informed him of his quarian engineer's recent downloads. But seeing it for real was still came as a mild shock.
"Nerve-Stim Pro? Tali, you naughty little minx."
The whole while, Tali was squirming under John's hold, unable to wiggle free. Though, in John's opinion, it did not seem like she even wanted to. Her half-hearted shoves seemed more like an excuse for her to grope his muscles, her light squeezes on his arms and chest not going unnoticed. Despite her descent into her native khelish tongue, John could still discern her basic tone of voice, which seemed more excited than angry.
The human waited a moment, and when Tali made no move to stop him him, he started up the the suit application. An instant later, a low, humming noise came from the suit, in addition to a surprised yelp from the quarian within. Tali's head flew back back as John pressed his leg into her, rubbing up between her legs. Her knees buckled as she let out a low moan, her suit transforming the pressure of John's leg into small, pleasant vibrations on the interior of her suit, tickling her sensitive skin and making her grow moist.
Tali felt a a heat pooling in in the pit of her stomach, pleasure flaring within her. Her suit felt tighter, hotter. She could feel John's hand work it's way around her body, her skin set ablaze as his hand slid down her back and palmed her hindquarters.
"Keelah-aaah!" Tali mewled, pawing at her human's broad shoulder, pulling him towards her. The quarian could feel her arousal begin to trickle down her leg, trapped between her suit and her skin.
John had her and there was nothing Tali could do about it. Nothing she wanted to do about it.
John's other hand, the one not occupied with Tali's... assets, found it way to one of her breasts, giving it a gentle squeeze. Tali moaned, arching her back dramatically and leaning into John.
The human began to move his body, rubbing his leg up between Tali's legs, this time with more pressure and frequency. John used his hold on her lower back to grind his quarian against him as he kneaded her pert breasts through her suit, rubbing his fingers as to where he assumed her nipples might be. Judging from the stream of quarian curses that flowed from her mouth, John believed he assumed correctly.
"Keelah mato'usleh dare taztla yllozta-ah!"
John remained silent, ignoring the growing muscle in his pants, which, at the moment, were getting tighter. Instead, he chose to simply watch Tali writhe in arms, his enjoyment coming from giving his angel pleasure she had not known before.
In the commander's opinion, the quarian orgasm was a sight to behold.
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2e/?
anonymous
October 8 2012, 05:13:51 UTC
Tali came hard, spilling herself inside her suit. She could feel her warmth slide down her leggings, down to her feet. The suit would absorb it eventually, a feature that the early nomadic quarians came up with shortly after it became apparent that they would not be getting Rannoch back as soon as they thought.
The quarian engineer sighed as John slowly released her, Tali not wanting the warmth that was John's muscled body to leave so soon. Her legs felt weak, barely able to stay upright.
John simply stood there, a look in his eye that sent shivers down Tali's spine. He never looked at her that way before! He had never looked at anyone that way before! What Tali saw in John's eyes was pure, unbridled lust. And perhaps a smug sense of cheekiness.
A moment passed and neither said a word.
Another moment passed and it finally dawned on Tali what had just occurred.
"Yo-you..." Tali's voice was shaky, as was her legs. John simply gave a look beneath hooded eyes, a look that made something ignite within her.
The quarian felt a flood of emotions filling her mind, many thoughts forming as a result. The most prominent of which being: How dare he!?
"BOSH'TET!"
Tali balled her little hand into an equally little fist, launching into the primate's chest. The hairless monkey simply smiled, an arrogant smirk that fueled a rage within Tali.
"BOSH'TET! BOSH'TET! BOSH'TET!"
The engineer punctuated each exclamation with another punch, slamming her fist against the ape's arms and chest. Tali didn't know why she bothered. It wasn't like they would do anything. If a man the size of John could take a bullet close range, what would a fist do, let alone a fist from a petite quarian engineer not known for her physical strength.
The smug bastard said nothing, smirking at her in that enraging, arrogant way as he turned and left engineering. Tali had half a mind to chuck an engine part at the back of his stupid, square head, but she didn't. Her limbs, her muscles, her entire body was spent. The hairless ape clearly knew the female form.
"That-that!" Tali still could not believe recent events, "That... bosh'tet! The... the audacity!"
The quarian, however enraged at John, was ultimately angered with herself, for many reasons.
For allowing him to so easily dominate her.
For not fighting back.
And for enjoying it.
Tali didn't understand. That was nothing like something John would do! The John Shepard she knew was selfess, compassionate, and understanding. A fierce protector of the helpless. A good man.
The John Shepard that had just fucked her against her workstation... he was... not those things. Though, maybe she could still count selfless, seeing as his apparent priority was making her come and not himself.
John had changed, that was for certain.
And Tali honestly did not know whether she disliked it or not.
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2e/?
anonymous
October 9 2012, 02:23:24 UTC
Goddess, yes please. This is perfection. I romanced Tali, Miranda, and Jack in ME2 and ended up picking Tali, but had all three of them at the romance point. Only way to make this hotter would be to add Miranda. Love it. Keep up the amazing work.
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2e/?
anonymous
October 9 2012, 02:48:01 UTC
Man, oh man. Good to see this story start to update again. Still great stuff, and I'm dying to see what happens when Jack gets her corrupting little mitts on Tali.
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2e/?
anonymous
October 18 2012, 16:28:17 UTC
Original "seconded" reader here; a!a, you've transcended mortality with your awesome. This is quite possibly the most glorious thing I've ever read, and I can't wait for more. And more. And more.
"Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - Author!Anon Here!
anonymous
November 6 2012, 02:25:49 UTC
I'd just like to take a moment here and apologize to the OP of this great prompt and any others who happened to be waiting patiently for an update.
No, this is not me saying I'm abandoning this prompt, so cool your jets. This is the opposite. This is me apologizing for making you guys wait for so long. I have been VERY busy lately and my personal life has not let me get a lot of writing done...
Well, that's a lie. I have been getting writing done, but those were personal projects on ff.net and other places. So yeah, I'm a selfish prick. Sorry 'bout that.
I will complete this fill, just give me some time, and I promise I'll blow your mind. After all, you don't want around six or seven chapters of the same ol' vanilla sex, do you? You want six or seven more chapters of awesome smut!
So, I humbly ask for your forgiveness OP, for being something of a selfish prick and ignoring a promise I made. There's nothing more I detest than someone who just drops a prompt altogether and I'll make sure it won't happen to you, good sir!
*phew*
Just one more small thing: I'll probably write out the whole thing first, then post it in its entirety on the new pages. I don't want to have you going all the way back to part 12!
"I know how much you care for me. The feeling is very, very mutual, I assure you..."
Tali was practically pressed up against Shepard now, her hands entwined with his.
"...But we can't have any distractions right now. The mission is too important for you to be worrying about me all the time."
John's spirits were crushed. Every time they got too close, either John or Tali would do or say something that made them back-pedal out. Maybe they were afraid of the consequences of such a coupling or maybe it was some other reason.
See? You're not together! She even said it herself! Stop feeling guilty!
John frowned once more as he met Tali's eyes with his own. He nodded slowly.
"Yeah... I understand..." John sounded dejected, a defeated tone filling his voice. Tali didn't look much better, her shoulders drooping and her head hung low as she tried to avoid eye contact with the human in front of her.
It doesn't matter if it's not official! You know how she feels about you! She said it herself just moments ago!
Which she immediately back-pedaled on! You can't be expected to wait forever!
Tali is worth it.
So are you!
Tali deserves someone who will wait for her.
And you deserve someone who will actually be with you!
I deserve...
Look back on all the shit you've been through! Elysium, Eden Prime, Noveria, Feros, Virmire, The fucking Citadel, Horizon! The entire goddamn galaxy owes you their lives! What you deserve, what I deserve, is to have some fucking fun!
John faltered. He didn't know how much influence Jack was able to put onto his mind, but he found himself somewhat agreeing with her.
You're a lion, Shepard. Bare those teeth...
What happened next was not something that John could easily explain or rationalize, even several years later. Tali did not know that her captain could move that quickly, and honestly, neither did John. Before either of them could form a coherent thought, John had Tali pinned against her console, one of his legs forcing her own apart as he pressed himself flush against her.
"John! What-!?"
...And sink them deep.
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"Nerve-Stim Pro? Tali, you naughty little minx."
The whole while, Tali was squirming under John's hold, unable to wiggle free. Though, in John's opinion, it did not seem like she even wanted to. Her half-hearted shoves seemed more like an excuse for her to grope his muscles, her light squeezes on his arms and chest not going unnoticed. Despite her descent into her native khelish tongue, John could still discern her basic tone of voice, which seemed more excited than angry.
The human waited a moment, and when Tali made no move to stop him him, he started up the the suit application. An instant later, a low, humming noise came from the suit, in addition to a surprised yelp from the quarian within. Tali's head flew back back as John pressed his leg into her, rubbing up between her legs. Her knees buckled as she let out a low moan, her suit transforming the pressure of John's leg into small, pleasant vibrations on the interior of her suit, tickling her sensitive skin and making her grow moist.
Tali felt a a heat pooling in in the pit of her stomach, pleasure flaring within her. Her suit felt tighter, hotter. She could feel John's hand work it's way around her body, her skin set ablaze as his hand slid down her back and palmed her hindquarters.
"Keelah-aaah!" Tali mewled, pawing at her human's broad shoulder, pulling him towards her. The quarian could feel her arousal begin to trickle down her leg, trapped between her suit and her skin.
John had her and there was nothing Tali could do about it. Nothing she wanted to do about it.
John's other hand, the one not occupied with Tali's... assets, found it way to one of her breasts, giving it a gentle squeeze. Tali moaned, arching her back dramatically and leaning into John.
The human began to move his body, rubbing his leg up between Tali's legs, this time with more pressure and frequency. John used his hold on her lower back to grind his quarian against him as he kneaded her pert breasts through her suit, rubbing his fingers as to where he assumed her nipples might be. Judging from the stream of quarian curses that flowed from her mouth, John believed he assumed correctly.
"Keelah mato'usleh dare taztla yllozta-ah!"
John remained silent, ignoring the growing muscle in his pants, which, at the moment, were getting tighter. Instead, he chose to simply watch Tali writhe in arms, his enjoyment coming from giving his angel pleasure she had not known before.
In the commander's opinion, the quarian orgasm was a sight to behold.
It was even better to listen to.
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The quarian engineer sighed as John slowly released her, Tali not wanting the warmth that was John's muscled body to leave so soon. Her legs felt weak, barely able to stay upright.
John simply stood there, a look in his eye that sent shivers down Tali's spine. He never looked at her that way before! He had never looked at anyone that way before! What Tali saw in John's eyes was pure, unbridled lust. And perhaps a smug sense of cheekiness.
A moment passed and neither said a word.
Another moment passed and it finally dawned on Tali what had just occurred.
"Yo-you..." Tali's voice was shaky, as was her legs. John simply gave a look beneath hooded eyes, a look that made something ignite within her.
The quarian felt a flood of emotions filling her mind, many thoughts forming as a result. The most prominent of which being: How dare he!?
"BOSH'TET!"
Tali balled her little hand into an equally little fist, launching into the primate's chest. The hairless monkey simply smiled, an arrogant smirk that fueled a rage within Tali.
"BOSH'TET! BOSH'TET! BOSH'TET!"
The engineer punctuated each exclamation with another punch, slamming her fist against the ape's arms and chest. Tali didn't know why she bothered. It wasn't like they would do anything. If a man the size of John could take a bullet close range, what would a fist do, let alone a fist from a petite quarian engineer not known for her physical strength.
The smug bastard said nothing, smirking at her in that enraging, arrogant way as he turned and left engineering. Tali had half a mind to chuck an engine part at the back of his stupid, square head, but she didn't. Her limbs, her muscles, her entire body was spent. The hairless ape clearly knew the female form.
"That-that!" Tali still could not believe recent events, "That... bosh'tet! The... the audacity!"
The quarian, however enraged at John, was ultimately angered with herself, for many reasons.
For allowing him to so easily dominate her.
For not fighting back.
And for enjoying it.
Tali didn't understand. That was nothing like something John would do! The John Shepard she knew was selfess, compassionate, and understanding. A fierce protector of the helpless. A good man.
The John Shepard that had just fucked her against her workstation... he was... not those things. Though, maybe she could still count selfless, seeing as his apparent priority was making her come and not himself.
John had changed, that was for certain.
And Tali honestly did not know whether she disliked it or not.
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Im blown away at how great this story is. I well and truly cant wait to see more.
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No, this is not me saying I'm abandoning this prompt, so cool your jets. This is the opposite. This is me apologizing for making you guys wait for so long. I have been VERY busy lately and my personal life has not let me get a lot of writing done...
Well, that's a lie. I have been getting writing done, but those were personal projects on ff.net and other places. So yeah, I'm a selfish prick. Sorry 'bout that.
I will complete this fill, just give me some time, and I promise I'll blow your mind. After all, you don't want around six or seven chapters of the same ol' vanilla sex, do you? You want six or seven more chapters of awesome smut!
So, I humbly ask for your forgiveness OP, for being something of a selfish prick and ignoring a promise I made. There's nothing more I detest than someone who just drops a prompt altogether and I'll make sure it won't happen to you, good sir!
*phew*
Just one more small thing: I'll probably write out the whole thing first, then post it in its entirety on the new pages. I don't want to have you going all the way back to part 12!
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I was getting curious i admit.
Im willing to wait, and cant wait to see more, but, well...the last time i was told something like this, it didnt end well.
Regardless, i will put my trust in you, author. I look forward to seeing the finished product.
(I hope i dont offend you in any way. You were honest with me, something i truly appreciate, and i figured its only fair that im honest with you.)
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