Re: Liara/FemShep + Aria/Tevos Foursome(ish) (Part 5/?)
anonymous
August 9 2012, 03:16:55 UTC
I derped about the tattoo. Aria's Omega symbol is different than the greek letter. I had to tweak a few paragraphs in Update 3. I can't alter them here, but the version on fanfiction.net, archiveofourown, and my personal websites will be a bit different.
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"Ahem..." Tevos cleared her throat gently, turning to face Liara and offering Shepard and Aria a very nice view of her naked profile. "Not that this conversation isn't fascinating, but the rest of you still have your clothes on... I'm feeling a little vulnerable." The councilor chewed on the stripe that split her bottom lip, kicking her dress away from her ankles.
Shepard sat up straighter and shifted forward on the couch expectantly. "Liara. Strip."
Liara only paused for a moment before sliding out of her shoes. Once her feet were bare, she folded her arms protectively around her stomach for a moment and turned around. "I need you to undo my dress as well," she murmured, gesturing toward the straps at the back of her neck. It was a simple knot that Liara probably could have untied herself, but Tevos didn't question the invitation. She smiled and stepped forward, settling her hands on Liara's warm shoulders and squeezing briefly before undoing the knot. Since the back of the dress was open, its entire top half fell down once Tevos released the straps. She felt Liara tremble slightly against her hands as she pushed gently at the bunched fabric around her waist, easing it to the floor. Unlike her, Liara had decided to wear panties. Lacy, completely impractical, very attractive looking black ones.
Aria hummed her approval, the corners of her mouth twitching up. "Very nice," she drawled, lifting her hand and twirling it slightly. When Liara glanced to Shepard for direction, the human nodded her head in agreement, wordlessly offering her permission. Liara made a slow circle, even gaining enough confidence to pop her hip slightly and put her hand on her waist at the end.
Liara's display, while not a full striptease, was enticing enough to convince Shepard to stand up and start tugging at her own dress. Liara laughed. "The Great Commander Shepard, the Godslayer, Savior of the Galaxy, apparently can't take her own clothes off," she teased, shaking her head and crossing the short distance to stand at Shepard's side. There wasn't a lot of room to maneuver, since the two couches were so close, with only enough space for their legs and the table in between. She brushed aside a lock of Shepard's hair and tucked it behind her ear. "Let me help."
With Liara's help, Shepard managed to strip out of her dress and underwear in just over a minute. Once her job was done, Liara gave Shepard's shoulder a kiss, inadvertently stepping out of the way and offering Tevos and Aria their first proper view.
"Goddess... is that...? I'm not sure what to -"
Shepard lifted her head at Tevos's outburst. She gave Liara a confused look, and the other asari burst out laughing. "Remember how surprised I was by your hair before Ilos, Shepard? Humans have hair everywhere, Thea. Under their arms, along their legs, and above their pubic bones."
Tevos frowned, circling the table to stand beside Shepard as well and get a closer look. "But Shepard does not have hair anywhere else except on top of her head..."
"That's because I remove it," Shepard explained, laughing now that she was in on the joke. "And shape what I have down there, too. This is just a little strip."
Liara smirked and leaned in slightly closer to Tevos, whispering as if she was revealing a great secret. "Sometimes, when she gets bored with how it looks, she takes it all off for a while."
Before she realized what she was doing, Tevos watched her own hands reach out to touch Shepard's arm, her eyes widening in fascination as she felt the tiny, soft hairs there. Even the texture of Shepard's skin was different than an asari's. "I've watched vids with human women in them -"
"Oh, the actresses in porn always take it all off," Aria said, sounding just as amused by her bondmate's incorrect assumptions as Liara and Shepard.
Tevos turned around, removing her hand from Shepard's arm. "Wait, you knew about this and didn't think to warn me?" she asked, sounding only a little betrayed.
Re: Liara/FemShep + Aria/Tevos Foursome(ish) (Part 5/?)
anonymous
August 9 2012, 19:50:21 UTC
I bet Aria loves being the last one to strip, I also like that Liara looks to Shepard for permission before stripping. And Tevos being fascinated by Shepard's hair is so adorable. You just make her so cute and love-able. Loving the pace you are setting :)
Re: Liara/FemShep + Aria/Tevos Foursome(ish) (Part 5/?)
anonymous
August 10 2012, 04:48:59 UTC
I feel you, I actually signed up for the email notification when someone posts a comment in parts 9-11 of the Kink meme. So I have to wade through all the emails that come on my cell/inbox to find the ones that I actually want. Which is sadly about 10% of the emails if not less. But if I wasnt getting the emails I would be coming back here to f5 every chance I could get or read MMIP again. :P I read that one way too much but I love it.
Would you have any idea on why I can't see past part 5? It wont load, i have tried bringing it up about 3 times, in 3 different ways. It all stops on part five. I'll figure it out I guess, still learning how to use Live Journal.
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"Ahem..." Tevos cleared her throat gently, turning to face Liara and offering Shepard and Aria a very nice view of her naked profile. "Not that this conversation isn't fascinating, but the rest of you still have your clothes on... I'm feeling a little vulnerable." The councilor chewed on the stripe that split her bottom lip, kicking her dress away from her ankles.
Shepard sat up straighter and shifted forward on the couch expectantly. "Liara. Strip."
Liara only paused for a moment before sliding out of her shoes. Once her feet were bare, she folded her arms protectively around her stomach for a moment and turned around. "I need you to undo my dress as well," she murmured, gesturing toward the straps at the back of her neck. It was a simple knot that Liara probably could have untied herself, but Tevos didn't question the invitation. She smiled and stepped forward, settling her hands on Liara's warm shoulders and squeezing briefly before undoing the knot. Since the back of the dress was open, its entire top half fell down once Tevos released the straps. She felt Liara tremble slightly against her hands as she pushed gently at the bunched fabric around her waist, easing it to the floor. Unlike her, Liara had decided to wear panties. Lacy, completely impractical, very attractive looking black ones.
Aria hummed her approval, the corners of her mouth twitching up. "Very nice," she drawled, lifting her hand and twirling it slightly. When Liara glanced to Shepard for direction, the human nodded her head in agreement, wordlessly offering her permission. Liara made a slow circle, even gaining enough confidence to pop her hip slightly and put her hand on her waist at the end.
Liara's display, while not a full striptease, was enticing enough to convince Shepard to stand up and start tugging at her own dress. Liara laughed. "The Great Commander Shepard, the Godslayer, Savior of the Galaxy, apparently can't take her own clothes off," she teased, shaking her head and crossing the short distance to stand at Shepard's side. There wasn't a lot of room to maneuver, since the two couches were so close, with only enough space for their legs and the table in between. She brushed aside a lock of Shepard's hair and tucked it behind her ear. "Let me help."
With Liara's help, Shepard managed to strip out of her dress and underwear in just over a minute. Once her job was done, Liara gave Shepard's shoulder a kiss, inadvertently stepping out of the way and offering Tevos and Aria their first proper view.
"Goddess... is that...? I'm not sure what to -"
Shepard lifted her head at Tevos's outburst. She gave Liara a confused look, and the other asari burst out laughing. "Remember how surprised I was by your hair before Ilos, Shepard? Humans have hair everywhere, Thea. Under their arms, along their legs, and above their pubic bones."
Tevos frowned, circling the table to stand beside Shepard as well and get a closer look. "But Shepard does not have hair anywhere else except on top of her head..."
"That's because I remove it," Shepard explained, laughing now that she was in on the joke. "And shape what I have down there, too. This is just a little strip."
Liara smirked and leaned in slightly closer to Tevos, whispering as if she was revealing a great secret. "Sometimes, when she gets bored with how it looks, she takes it all off for a while."
Before she realized what she was doing, Tevos watched her own hands reach out to touch Shepard's arm, her eyes widening in fascination as she felt the tiny, soft hairs there. Even the texture of Shepard's skin was different than an asari's. "I've watched vids with human women in them -"
"Oh, the actresses in porn always take it all off," Aria said, sounding just as amused by her bondmate's incorrect assumptions as Liara and Shepard.
Tevos turned around, removing her hand from Shepard's arm. "Wait, you knew about this and didn't think to warn me?" she asked, sounding only a little betrayed.
"And miss your reaction? Never."
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Ashley: I can wear swimwear into battle.
Shepard: Nice!
Liara: What? Me too.
Shepard: Double nice!
Jack: Me too.
Liara: I don't like where this is going...
Shepard: Hey... we'll bang, okay?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pSawGT5bgdM
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Seriously, I keep checking on this fic everyday and every minute just to see if there's any update. Goddess, I have no life.
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Would you have any idea on why I can't see past part 5? It wont load, i have tried bringing it up about 3 times, in 3 different ways. It all stops on part five. I'll figure it out I guess, still learning how to use Live Journal.
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