FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 3 2012, 10:41:26 UTC
If the bottom floor of the club was less noisy than the one above, it was by a debatable margin.
Shepard and Liara didn't have any trouble locating the rest of the group--the Normandy's crew took up three tables and spilled over onto a fourth. The commander found two adjacent chairs and pulled them out, gesturing for Liara to sit as she collapsed into her own seat.
Their tablemates were huddled in various stages of inebriation--a few of them cradled their foreheads in their hands, one gazed bleary-eyed up at the ceiling, and another had collapsed onto the table, his cheek flattened against the the surface.
"Reconsidering your decision to foot the bill tonight, Commander?" Joker teased from the next table over as he tipped his glass in their direction.
"Always," Shepard groaned as she used an elbow to nudge one of her comrades, halfheartedly checking for signs of consciousness.
"Your generosity is appreciated, regardless of how thoroughly we may exploit it." Garrus had reappeared, clumsily carrying a chair under one arm. He sighed as he set it down to join them, his expression blissfully satisfied as Tali fell into the seat beside his.
"You know," Shepard grinned, casually popping the knuckles on one hand with her thumb while the other moved to cover Liara's exposed knee. "We should do this more often. Liara was just telling me how much she's enjoying herself."
Calloused fingertips slid slowly up Liara's inner thigh, causing the asari to stiffen and shoot a sideways glance at her companion. When she felt Shepard's hand drift further upwards, grazing carelessly over her moist outer folds and coming to rest on her mound, she sucked in a breath through her teeth.
"You are an ass," she hissed out of the corner of her mouth.
Shepard's eyes widened in feigned shock. She leaned in and breathed softly against the side of Liara's head. "That is not," she murmured as she slipped one finger into the accumulated wetness and began to stroke up and down, "very nice."
Liara's fingers splayed against the table and she dragged them down to grip the edge of the surface, clenching her jaw as Shepard's index finger rubbed expertly against her neglected bud, teasing it through its hood.
As the incessant circling between her legs became more pronounced, Liara squirmed--torn between scooting away from Shepard's touch and grinding into it. Liara groaned under her breath when Shepard became engaged in another side-conversation, and moved her own hand to rest on the human's thigh, digging her nails into Shepard's pants.
"Are you feeling all right, Liara?" Tali's voice cut through the dull chatter, and Liara realized her face was twisted in a grimace.
"Just a bit of a headache," she replied weakly, and saw Shepard turn her head.
The commander leaned in to whisper what looked from a distance like comforting words of reassurance, but the low rumble against Liara's ear said otherwise.
"You can scowl and complain all you want," Shepard growled, tilting her hand forward to bury two fingers to the hilt, smirking when Liara swallowed back a moan. "But you and I both know that you want this. I can feel how much you want this."
Shepard was not wrong--Liara felt a twinge of disappointment when the hand between her legs pulled away. She glanced around the table and noted with relief that no one was looking at them, though the person sitting to her right was close enough that their knees inadvertently bumped together whenever either one of them moved.
"I want this too. I need this," Shepard whispered, bringing her slick fingers to her lips. Her tongue peeked out from between her index and middle finger as she licked a line from first knuckle to fingertip, before guiding them into her mouth and suckling deeply.
"Then let's step outside for a moment," Liara urged quietly, squeezing her thighs together as she watched Shepard languidly swirl her tongue around the digits.
"Nah," Shepard pulled her hand away with a smack and let it fall back into place under the table, gliding back into Liara's entrance with ease as she began to pump in and out. "I decide when you get what you want. I decide when you come."
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 3 2012, 15:10:18 UTC
My fucking god.
Climbed out of bed. Walked to the computer. Read this. Melted. Crawled back into bed.
I can feel how much you want this.
I want this too. I need this.
Rrrrrrrrrr.
I decide when you get what you want. I decide when you come.
asdhekhfkjefh
This ... yeah. I wish I could write half as good as you. I wish I'd written my orgasm-denial scene as perfectly as this. More, please, before I start feeling like Liara.
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 4 2012, 07:53:32 UTC
what!! I'm guessing you are part of the pg. 22 dynamic duo because that's the only other orgasm denial scene I think I've seen recently??
if so--your writing is fucking fantastic! both of you guys are crazy talented. the collab is sssssmokin' hot, perfectly paced, and watching you banter back and forth is super charming and hilarious.
and if that's not you and that's not the fill you're talkin about, then--umm, link plz :B
aaand thank you for your kind words ;D trying to gauge the quality of my own writing is kind of like trying to tickle myself, so I appreciate feedback that lets me know when I'm successful. ;b
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 4 2012, 14:49:10 UTC
Yeah, I'm the second author there, but I'm totally serious. It's really incredible how you're able to create an unbearably sexy scene without relying on inner monologue. Their actions really show everything they're feeling. That's a talent I wish that I had. I'm already emo about your being busy these next few days!
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 3 2012, 16:59:17 UTC
.... I feel like I just had my hair blown back by a hot hairdryer, if that makes any sense. @_@
Orgasm denial usually isn't at the top of my (admittedly long) list of kinks - although I'll admit that it is on there - so I typically end up focusing on other things, but damn if you haven't inspired me a bit with this. I might have to address this newfound fascination in some of my own fills.
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 3 2012, 19:00:17 UTC
Well gawrsh people, you're making this OP!anon feel so darn self-conscious about gushing over this hawtness... *squirms and scuffs at the ground with the tip of her shoe, all blushy and coy* I can't help it, it just makes me feel so happy to read something so damn great, inspired by one of my ideas I can't write myself! The least I can do is show my appreciation to the best of my abilities, by gushing like a crazy person.
...Here's some more gushing, because some is definitely needed. First things first, oh my GOD. The image of Shepard just outright fucking Liara under the table in front of all those people...!!! I had trouble breathing after reading that, so thanks a!a for almost killing me. WITH SEXINESS. What a way to go. Nnnnngargh. Seriously. I can't stress the hotness of that, I just... can't.
Poor, POOR Liara. I know I'm an evil sadist for enjoying how much sexy torture she's going through, but I can't help it! I adore the idea of a woman being totally frustrated and teased to the point of breaking by her lover, all aching and throbbing and needing to come so bad...! Could be because I'm also a sucker for begging and pleading, and those two do usually go hand in hand.
Also, I just love how Shepard is so callously using Liara to satisfy her own needs and addiction. There's just something so damn sexy about the way the Commander licks at her fingers and enjoying Liara's taste, and making her WATCH...
Ugh. I could go on and on about what I love about this! This fill is all I could have ever hoped for and more! Mmmh. I will be having such sweetly frustrating dreams tonight, I'm sure. I'm just dying to read more. Oh lordy lord, a!a, more, MORE! Please? Pretty please?
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 3 2012, 19:52:02 UTC
Ack, I'm sorry OP, I didn't mean to make you self-conscious. :( My intent was to compliment you! I'd kill for comments like this on my stuff. I'll shut up now (apart from saying I desperately agree with said gushing).
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 4 2012, 08:38:35 UTC
OP, I'm your #1 fan c: really can't tell you how gratifying it is to get this kind of feedback. this is why I love this group of anons so much--I feel like I live in a gated community or something. ;b the enthusiasm and encouragement and support and inside jokes etc etc are just tremendous. warm and fuzzies.
I kinda strayed a bit from the prompt in the update I posted earlier but I promise it'll get back on track soon!
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 4 2012, 14:55:54 UTC
Ooh, I have a fan? Gee, I feel like a celebrity now! And I guess I can survive a few sweet comments about my silly gushing. And then just keep gushing some more because gah, this fill is beyond amazing. BEYOND, I SAY!
You strayed from the prompt? *checks* Huh, I guess you did, a tiny bit? ...Dahlin', if your straying ends up with Liara struggling to keep her mouth shut and not inform everyone at the table with her moans that Shepard just brought her to a delicious orgams, right there, right then, in front of them all... You can keep straying all the fuck you want and I'll be there like the sad, pathetic fangirl I am and just beg for more, on my hands and knees, always ready and willing and...
Wait, that metaphor went somewhere totally wrong there. My apologies, though I blame you, a!a. The sexiness and hotness of this fill just keep melting my brain into a puddle of blissed out goo. I hope you're happy now, melting brains and killing me with sexiness. Shame on you. Shaaaaaaame.
Shepard and Liara didn't have any trouble locating the rest of the group--the Normandy's crew took up three tables and spilled over onto a fourth. The commander found two adjacent chairs and pulled them out, gesturing for Liara to sit as she collapsed into her own seat.
Their tablemates were huddled in various stages of inebriation--a few of them cradled their foreheads in their hands, one gazed bleary-eyed up at the ceiling, and another had collapsed onto the table, his cheek flattened against the the surface.
"Reconsidering your decision to foot the bill tonight, Commander?" Joker teased from the next table over as he tipped his glass in their direction.
"Always," Shepard groaned as she used an elbow to nudge one of her comrades, halfheartedly checking for signs of consciousness.
"Your generosity is appreciated, regardless of how thoroughly we may exploit it." Garrus had reappeared, clumsily carrying a chair under one arm. He sighed as he set it down to join them, his expression blissfully satisfied as Tali fell into the seat beside his.
"You know," Shepard grinned, casually popping the knuckles on one hand with her thumb while the other moved to cover Liara's exposed knee. "We should do this more often. Liara was just telling me how much she's enjoying herself."
Calloused fingertips slid slowly up Liara's inner thigh, causing the asari to stiffen and shoot a sideways glance at her companion. When she felt Shepard's hand drift further upwards, grazing carelessly over her moist outer folds and coming to rest on her mound, she sucked in a breath through her teeth.
"You are an ass," she hissed out of the corner of her mouth.
Shepard's eyes widened in feigned shock. She leaned in and breathed softly against the side of Liara's head. "That is not," she murmured as she slipped one finger into the accumulated wetness and began to stroke up and down, "very nice."
Liara's fingers splayed against the table and she dragged them down to grip the edge of the surface, clenching her jaw as Shepard's index finger rubbed expertly against her neglected bud, teasing it through its hood.
As the incessant circling between her legs became more pronounced, Liara squirmed--torn between scooting away from Shepard's touch and grinding into it. Liara groaned under her breath when Shepard became engaged in another side-conversation, and moved her own hand to rest on the human's thigh, digging her nails into Shepard's pants.
"Are you feeling all right, Liara?" Tali's voice cut through the dull chatter, and Liara realized her face was twisted in a grimace.
"Just a bit of a headache," she replied weakly, and saw Shepard turn her head.
The commander leaned in to whisper what looked from a distance like comforting words of reassurance, but the low rumble against Liara's ear said otherwise.
"You can scowl and complain all you want," Shepard growled, tilting her hand forward to bury two fingers to the hilt, smirking when Liara swallowed back a moan. "But you and I both know that you want this. I can feel how much you want this."
Shepard was not wrong--Liara felt a twinge of disappointment when the hand between her legs pulled away. She glanced around the table and noted with relief that no one was looking at them, though the person sitting to her right was close enough that their knees inadvertently bumped together whenever either one of them moved.
"I want this too. I need this," Shepard whispered, bringing her slick fingers to her lips. Her tongue peeked out from between her index and middle finger as she licked a line from first knuckle to fingertip, before guiding them into her mouth and suckling deeply.
"Then let's step outside for a moment," Liara urged quietly, squeezing her thighs together as she watched Shepard languidly swirl her tongue around the digits.
"Nah," Shepard pulled her hand away with a smack and let it fall back into place under the table, gliding back into Liara's entrance with ease as she began to pump in and out. "I decide when you get what you want. I decide when you come."
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Excuse me while I fan myself.
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Climbed out of bed. Walked to the computer. Read this. Melted. Crawled back into bed.
I can feel how much you want this.
I want this too. I need this.
Rrrrrrrrrr.
I decide when you get what you want. I decide when you come.
asdhekhfkjefh
This ... yeah. I wish I could write half as good as you. I wish I'd written my orgasm-denial scene as perfectly as this. More, please, before I start feeling like Liara.
(I can't wait to see the OP's reaction to this.)
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if so--your writing is fucking fantastic! both of you guys are crazy talented. the collab is sssssmokin' hot, perfectly paced, and watching you banter back and forth is super charming and hilarious.
and if that's not you and that's not the fill you're talkin about, then--umm, link plz :B
aaand thank you for your kind words ;D trying to gauge the quality of my own writing is kind of like trying to tickle myself, so I appreciate feedback that lets me know when I'm successful. ;b
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Orgasm denial usually isn't at the top of my (admittedly long) list of kinks - although I'll admit that it is on there - so I typically end up focusing on other things, but damn if you haven't inspired me a bit with this. I might have to address this newfound fascination in some of my own fills.
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...Here's some more gushing, because some is definitely needed. First things first, oh my GOD. The image of Shepard just outright fucking Liara under the table in front of all those people...!!! I had trouble breathing after reading that, so thanks a!a for almost killing me. WITH SEXINESS. What a way to go. Nnnnngargh. Seriously. I can't stress the hotness of that, I just... can't.
Poor, POOR Liara. I know I'm an evil sadist for enjoying how much sexy torture she's going through, but I can't help it! I adore the idea of a woman being totally frustrated and teased to the point of breaking by her lover, all aching and throbbing and needing to come so bad...! Could be because I'm also a sucker for begging and pleading, and those two do usually go hand in hand.
Also, I just love how Shepard is so callously using Liara to satisfy her own needs and addiction. There's just something so damn sexy about the way the Commander licks at her fingers and enjoying Liara's taste, and making her WATCH...
Ugh. I could go on and on about what I love about this! This fill is all I could have ever hoped for and more! Mmmh. I will be having such sweetly frustrating dreams tonight, I'm sure. I'm just dying to read more. Oh lordy lord, a!a, more, MORE! Please? Pretty please?
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I kinda strayed a bit from the prompt in the update I posted earlier but I promise it'll get back on track soon!
p.s. sorry for almost killing you :c !!!!!
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You strayed from the prompt? *checks* Huh, I guess you did, a tiny bit? ...Dahlin', if your straying ends up with Liara struggling to keep her mouth shut and not inform everyone at the table with her moans that Shepard just brought her to a delicious orgams, right there, right then, in front of them all... You can keep straying all the fuck you want and I'll be there like the sad, pathetic fangirl I am and just beg for more, on my hands and knees, always ready and willing and...
Wait, that metaphor went somewhere totally wrong there. My apologies, though I blame you, a!a. The sexiness and hotness of this fill just keep melting my brain into a puddle of blissed out goo. I hope you're happy now, melting brains and killing me with sexiness. Shame on you. Shaaaaaaame.
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Holy shit A!A, that was hot!
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