FILL: M!Shep/Kaidan, Stargazing [9/9]
anonymous
February 16 2012, 03:22:59 UTC
He kisses him again, teeth clacking together as he presses Shepard's stupid head back, bites at his mouth and tastes the salty sweat on his upper lip. It's hard and messy but Shepard's tangling a hand in his hair and it's so goddamn hard to pull back. He wouldn't if Shepard's side wasn't slick with lost blood. The man gives him a dopey, dimpled smile that he's never even seen before, looking for all the world like he's just had a great fuck instead of a big goddamn injury. "Sn'ot bad, dun worry," John assures him, shrugging with one shoulder and promptly grimacing when he jostles the wound, "got a lot of tech in there, shit repairs itself." "Bullshit," he replies, shifting close so he can try to stem the bleeding--the bleeding which has slowed to nothing, once he scoops the already-clotting gore away from the injury. Shepard looks pale, the dark rings below his eyes suddenly stark, but he's curling his lips easily into that fond, focused smile that keeps turning him hard to port anyway. "Told you so." Ass.
He isn't sure what he quite intends to do when he sits up again, but he ends up exactly where he wants to be, pushed up close against Shepard the cramped cockpit, clutching him tight around his neck with one arm and kissing the scrappy, stupid, handsome, ridiculous asshole full on the mouth again, mindful of his damaged arm and Shepard's injured side. "C'mon," he snorts as Shepard's hand lands cautiously on his backside, "let's get out of this thing before it explodes." Shepard makes a petulant sound against his lips, kissing the indent above them, "I promise, i'll fuck you into your mattress when we get out of here."
Shepard pulls back, bites his kiss-plumped lower lip and looks at him like he just got a banned-in-council-space-without-thirty-five-different-permits krogan-issue Battlemaster XXI for Christmas. "Yes, sir."
Re: FILL: M!Shep/Kaidan, Stargazing [9/9]
anonymous
February 16 2012, 21:51:35 UTC
Wow. This story is THE most adorable thing. I like the fact that Shepard likes his guns and that to describe just how fantastic he though it was that Kaidan was kissing him. I like that the kisses were powerful. Kaidan panicking when he thought Shepard could be dying again. Your interpretation of Shepard. So cute. This is awesome! I'm sad it's finished.
Re: FILL: M!Shep/Kaidan, Stargazing [9/9]
anonymous
February 18 2012, 20:22:20 UTC
Thank you so much! C: I've always been iffy over Shepard not being able to be more of a sarcastic, silly motherfucker in canon (aside from a few inappropriate puns). Glad you enjoyed it!
Re: FILL: M!Shep/Kaidan, Stargazing [9/9]
anonymous
February 18 2012, 20:25:47 UTC
Oh man I know. Pls bioware. :C
And uh, maybe. Maaaaybeeeeee. I've got a lot of work (and a few prompts back up because I apparently hate sleep), but i'll probably do another for this pairing soonish! Perhaps this time with actual smut.
Re: FILL: M!Shep/Kaidan, Stargazing [9/9]
anonymous
February 21 2012, 01:58:02 UTC
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Awesome, though! Seeing how other people visualise their Shepards' personalities (and getting to share my own) is definitely my favourite part of writing for ME and reading other fills/fanfics. c:
Re: FILL: M!Shep/Kaidan, Stargazing [9/9]
anonymous
February 29 2012, 22:54:15 UTC
I have to admit, it's not how I personally picture their personalities (or Kaidan's anyway, 'cause Shep's always different depending on the player, naturally), but I liked it. Reading Shepard as being a smartass, kind of goofy and reckless was fun. I especially loved the new-gun-scene and when he and Kaidan talked about comic books :D That your story had 'silent' moments (like the stargazing) and action scenes (like the beginning or, of course, the fight against Cerberus) was just awesome. Good balance between comedy and drama, too. Just glad it all had a happy ending, bad endings just don't sit well with me. And I really loved the kissing scenes, those were intense, especially the second one when Kaidan was just relieved that Shepard's alive. And the last line makes for a great ending, left me grinning.
Thanks for writing this :) I really hope that all our gay M!Sheps will get this chance in ME3. God knows M!Shep needs his Kaidan, thanks for getting them together in your story at least (and at least for now...come on, Bioware).
"Bullshit," he replies, shifting close so he can try to stem the bleeding--the bleeding which has slowed to nothing, once he scoops the already-clotting gore away from the injury. Shepard looks pale, the dark rings below his eyes suddenly stark, but he's curling his lips easily into that fond, focused smile that keeps turning him hard to port anyway. "Told you so." Ass.
He isn't sure what he quite intends to do when he sits up again, but he ends up exactly where he wants to be, pushed up close against Shepard the cramped cockpit, clutching him tight around his neck with one arm and kissing the scrappy, stupid, handsome, ridiculous asshole full on the mouth again, mindful of his damaged arm and Shepard's injured side.
"C'mon," he snorts as Shepard's hand lands cautiously on his backside, "let's get out of this thing before it explodes." Shepard makes a petulant sound against his lips, kissing the indent above them, "I promise, i'll fuck you into your mattress when we get out of here."
Shepard pulls back, bites his kiss-plumped lower lip and looks at him like he just got a banned-in-council-space-without-thirty-five-different-permits krogan-issue Battlemaster XXI for Christmas. "Yes, sir."
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A++++, would read again
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Kaidan panicking when he thought Shepard could be dying again. Your interpretation of Shepard. So cute. This is awesome! I'm sad it's finished.
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o_o ...and can we see Shepard getting fucked into the mattress? Please, A!A?
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And uh, maybe. Maaaaybeeeeee. I've got a lot of work (and a few prompts back up because I apparently hate sleep), but i'll probably do another for this pairing soonish! Perhaps this time with actual smut.
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Awesome, though! Seeing how other people visualise their Shepards' personalities (and getting to share my own) is definitely my favourite part of writing for ME and reading other fills/fanfics. c:
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That your story had 'silent' moments (like the stargazing) and action scenes (like the beginning or, of course, the fight against Cerberus) was just awesome. Good balance between comedy and drama, too. Just glad it all had a happy ending, bad endings just don't sit well with me. And I really loved the kissing scenes, those were intense, especially the second one when Kaidan was just relieved that Shepard's alive. And the last line makes for a great ending, left me grinning.
Thanks for writing this :) I really hope that all our gay M!Sheps will get this chance in ME3. God knows M!Shep needs his Kaidan, thanks for getting them together in your story at least (and at least for now...come on, Bioware).
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