Brain Camp (thread for fic) "My brain has been scrambled like an egg! How do you think I feel?"
Did your muse get a biotic kick to the face? Turian at the helm of the dreadnaught that killed your father? Do you need feedback or encouragement for your fic?
Post your WIP fic snippet in this thread only!
(If you don't have a snippet and only need to rant about how your muse has failed you miserably, do it in this thread. Title it as a rant so the muse can be given its due of push-ups.)
... And one day I'll learn to preface my snippets with helpful comments and explanations before hitting the 'post comment' button.
This would (hopefully) be the beginning of the team's actual adventures in fighting the Reaper war - which means I need to think of something for them to do other than 'blow everything up'.
But knowing that someone would like to see more is very encouraging. =) Thanks.
Well, as to things to do that doesn't involve blowing stuff up, there's search and rescue (I imagine there are lots of collapsed buildings, memories of 9/11 here, wonder if they still use dogs in the future), supply runs, supply deliveries, logistics in general, passing messages, setting up bases and communications, training civilians... It all depends on how much of the details you want to go into.
"My brain has been scrambled like an egg! How do you think I feel?"
Did your muse get a biotic kick to the face? Turian at the helm of the dreadnaught that killed your father? Do you need feedback or encouragement for your fic?
Post your WIP fic snippet in this thread only!
(If you don't have a snippet and only need to rant about how your muse has failed you miserably, do it in this thread. Title it as a rant so the muse can be given its due of push-ups.)
Kiss the dirt, maggots!
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This would (hopefully) be the beginning of the team's actual adventures in fighting the Reaper war - which means I need to think of something for them to do other than 'blow everything up'.
But knowing that someone would like to see more is very encouraging. =) Thanks.
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Well, as to things to do that doesn't involve blowing stuff up, there's search and rescue (I imagine there are lots of collapsed buildings, memories of 9/11 here, wonder if they still use dogs in the future), supply runs, supply deliveries, logistics in general, passing messages, setting up bases and communications, training civilians... It all depends on how much of the details you want to go into.
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I love, love, love your dialogue.
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