Request

[masqueradingme]

Does anyone know of a Jaejoong background with him in the white suit he wore for the Try My Love performance during their first Japan concert? Or is there anyone that wouldn't mind making one for me, or teaching me how to make one? I'm desperate for a hot Jaejoong background, but I don't have any bribes. Help?

Comments

[animegoil]

First off, no, sorry. Dun know nothing bout no Jaejoong <-- My mafia talk!

Second off... wow, what a nice poem. It had like... emotional descriptions, something that made it seem very much alive. The contrasts too, were very cool ^_^ Ah, I was going to say it had something like a rhythm.. but I just realized it's not so much a rhythm as it is a flow. It flows very well. ^_^ Poetry critique is not my forte, so I have not much to say... you rhymed, which was cool. Lol. Makes it more 'poetic'. Is there anything in particular you wanted me to comment on? Otherwise, I don't know what to really scrutinize or how. I did like it though, a lot. ^_^ It was... I don't know, alive? Vivid? Yeah ♥

[masqueradingme]

Could you tell that it was in a song's POV? Like, I wasn't talking about myself? Did that make sense?

[animegoil]

Well, I was at first thinking it was either him talking about what a song allowed him to do or be, or the song itself speaking. But pretty soon I realized it was the song speaking itself. And if not, the last line clarifies it for anyone thoroughly confused.

[masqueradingme]

Okay, cool. Now the question is, will someone who's first language isn't English get that?

[animegoil]

I think so? I mean, it depends how good their English is, I suppose, but it's not like it was really complicated wording or something... I think so.