us college kids (1/1)

Jan 06, 2009 20:44

us college kids (college au, r) by holdmetightx
yunho/changmin (junsu/hyukjae), 6,981 words.
i’m back with more fail, just bear in mind that i nearly completely deleted this halfway through writing it. also, thank you for the amazing response on my jaechun fic (‘:
warnings: sex, more fail yoochun and general ridiculousness like everything i write.

’Thought you said you loved a challenge.’ Changmin snorts from the other side of the table and Jaejoong fixes his glare on him instead.

‘I said I loved a challenge, not that I loved the challenged.’
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fandom: dong bang shin ki, pairing: yunho/changmin, verse: college, !one-shot

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yuxo January 6 2009, 23:13:19 UTC
Wea;lskjdfoweijasldkjasldjf I apologize in advance for the…stupidity of the following comment, but I really believe this needs to be done because. Because. …because I will explode of happy times otherwise. :’DDDDD sobs idek anymore okay let me start with this fail overview thing I always seem to do. I love them all. I cannot even tell you how in love with Jaejoong I am. Jaejae is just…perfect. He’s a bitch and such a best friend I’m completely jealous of Changmin. And he’s such…a…asdflkajdfskja idek!! Perfect!! And Yoochun made me lol and :’3 for so long and he’s just so cute and Junsu and hyukjae lol idek I don’t even ship hyuksu romantically and I thought this was perfect. And Changmin and Changmin. Oh I don’t even know what to say to you. I don’t know what you EXPECT me to say to you because…oh my lord I haven’t read a homin fic like this in a while and it makes me so warm and fluffy inside and I love it so much I have no coherent words. Asldfjewpajsklfjlsdfj their interactions are so light-hearted, and when Changmin fucks up as he’s wont to do despite being the little genius he is, it is such an intense moment!! You wrote it so well! Changmin’s hesitancy and yunho’s reaction to it and then making up AND OUT afterwards was just…oh I don’t even know. Seriously, my heart and my brain can’t take this lmfao sobs sobs sobs dies. ADSLFKJSDFK i love these aspects of their personalities and I am soooo satisfied reading your portrayal of them! Your write with such levity and it’s such a joy to see something that isn’t swimming in cut-myself-everywhere angst. their interactions and the subtle differences in the way they interact with each other really brings such a huge smile to my face. :))))) UGH! IT IS SO GOOD okay enough of this fail rofl let me get to the quotes which are the only things that matter anyway rofl asflkjdsfkjasdflkdjf.

“Hey, is this seat free?” Changmin tries, hoisting the strap to his bag further up his shoulder.

“Yeah, dude, sit,” Yoochun grins, waving a hand in invitation, “no-one will sit next to the freaky American kid anyway.” Changmin gives him a scrutinizing look.

“...You don’t look American and your Korean’s pretty perfect.” He says with a lilt of his eyebrow.

“I know,” Yoochun pulls a completely pained look, “I’m just using it as an excuse for me being a loser with no friends.”

LASKDJFKDSJFLFDS YOUR YOOCHUN IS SO SHINY. ;A; he is adorable and loveable and that is the best thing I’ve ever heard. I-I think I’m going to start using that excuse. Except tweaked to suit my situation. Rofl you are so clever and it really shows in some of the later parts of the story too.

“Well, little Shim, it’s time to get you plastered.”

okay, okay, so I was okay with little Shim and I wasn’t going to be retarded about it but the more I thought about that coming out of jaejoong’s mouth the more I was like LKAJDSFPAWEFJPASLDKFJ HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA CANNOT TAKE IT ANYMORE MUST LAUGH LIKE A COMPLETE RETARD. So I did. :l little shim asdlfkjadskfj SOBS. sadfkjlads Jaejoong is my favourite tart ever can I have one. :llllllll

“Oh my God,” Changmin moans, “marry me and massage my temples forever, Yunho. Please. I swear I’ll be good to you, I’ll even pay you.” Yunho laughs bright but quiet, considerate to Changmin’s headache and his fingers keep rubbing.

;______________________________________; I wish I had a friend to take advantage of/propose to like this. Sobs. Yunho should think back on this conversation one day and consider the offer. :’DDDD

“An ugly, annoying, not-Yunho roommate, please.” Changmin mumbles into the back of his hand, shaking his head in dismay.

“Junsu’s already living with someone, sorry.”

LOL. LOLOLOLOLMFAO HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA IDEK IDEK HAHAHAHAHA PEES MYSELF junsuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu adsklfadsfkj hahahahahahahahahahahaha HOW ARE YOU THIS FUNNY. WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS. >:lllllll

“Please,” Changmin drags out once again, going back into the begging position and he adds a, “pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease”

awwwww so pathetic and adorable. :’)))))))))))

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