Target practice microfic

Sep 07, 2010 20:59


BBC Sherlock
Rating PG, pre-slash
Spoilers: none

Prompt at http://sherlockbbc-fic.livejournal.com/575.html?thread=68671#t68671 - shooting range fic

"Sherlock, good shooting is about consistency. There's no point in getting your first eight shots on target if your last two are all over the place because you got distracted. You're not going to be able ( Read more... )

sherlock's pov, preslash

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Comments 11

ferretmalfoy September 7 2010, 22:35:03 UTC
Cute.

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shycroft September 8 2010, 12:12:04 UTC
John is blind! lol XD

Loving the microfic!

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mremre September 9 2010, 10:05:09 UTC
What I wouldn't give for a Jack Harkness-type marksmanship lesson scene but starring John and Sherlock instead. Lovely fic, and it is wonderful how you packed so much in so little!

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marysutherland September 9 2010, 13:47:51 UTC
I'm afraid someone else will have to do any Jack Harkness-inspired stuff, because I haven't watched Dr Who or Torchwood, and I don't have time to do so and write as well. At the moment I'm mostly doing slightly longer stories, but I may end up back on microfics again at some point.

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prajnafirst October 4 2012, 11:48:05 UTC
Jack Harkness flirts with just about anything that moves. In the first (?) ep of Torchwood he teaches a girl to shoot,with a very very much added sexual tension and not to subtle flirting from jack. So basically mremre (my interpretation at least) is saying they'd like it if John enjoyed it/took advantage of the situation just as much as Sherlock did. Also i loved the microfic it was quite well put together thank you for the fill.

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lupus_malus September 11 2010, 10:18:52 UTC
This made me smile!

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chalumeau2 December 2 2010, 19:24:56 UTC
This is great, you say so much in so few words. Could I imagine all this happening, in my head? Absolutely.

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marysutherland December 2 2010, 21:45:11 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it - just occasionally I can do concise, though it doesn't come easily.

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